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Sept. 29, 2025

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I tried to translate this part of a book🥸

Everytime I was with you, I felt like an empty room, with nothing admirable, your 0 interest in me, make me feel like an insect everyday, the things you used to do to make me feel bad about me, your actions were like weapons and you were trying to kill me everytime
You only used to like the image you had from me in your head, nothing else

Siempre que estaba contigo me sentía como una cáscara, vacía, sin nada admirable. Tu desinterés y tus actos para hacerme sentir mal eran como lanzas que me atravesaban el pecho. Nunca te importé, ni cinco. Te gustaba fue la imagen que tenías de mí, pero no la verdadera yo

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Every time I was with you, I felt like an empty room, with nothing admirable, your. You having 0 interest in me, makes me feel like an insect every day, the things you used to do to make me feel bad about me, yyself. Your actions were like weapons, and you were trying to kill me every time .
You only used to like the image you had ofrom me in your head, nothing else.

In some places, the placement of comma is wrong. "Your 0 interest" feels unnatural. Instead, say "You having 0 interest"

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You should learn the use of commas properly in a sentence, and some sentences feel unnatural. Try adding the Grammarly app to your extensions.

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I tried to translate this part of a book🥸

Every time I was with you, I felt like an empty room, with nothing admirable, y. Your 0 interest in me, makde me feel like an insect everyday, t. The things you used to do to make me feel bad about meyself, your actions were like weapons and you were trying to kill me everyall the time .
You only used to like the image you had ofrom me in your head, nothing else.

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Nice work!

I tried to translate this part of a book🥸

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Everytime I was with you, I felt like an empty room, with nothing admirable, your 0 interest in me, make me feel like an insect everyday, the things you used to do to make me feel bad about me, your actions were like weapons and you were trying to kill me everytime You only used to like the image you had from me in your head, nothing else

Every time I was with you, I felt like an empty room, with nothing admirable, y. Your 0 interest in me, makde me feel like an insect everyday, t. The things you used to do to make me feel bad about meyself, your actions were like weapons and you were trying to kill me everyall the time .
You only used to like the image you had ofrom me in your head, nothing else.

Every time I was with you, I felt like an empty room, with nothing admirable, your. You having 0 interest in me, makes me feel like an insect every day, the things you used to do to make me feel bad about me, yyself. Your actions were like weapons, and you were trying to kill me every time .
You only used to like the image you had ofrom me in your head, nothing else.

In some places, the placement of comma is wrong. "Your 0 interest" feels unnatural. Instead, say "You having 0 interest"

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