April 19, 2021
I graduated from university last month, and most of my friends are scattered for work. However, some of my friends are near my living place. So, I study with them every week. I learn English for studying, the others look for a job, study a specialized field because she is a graduate student. When I study something with my friends, I can focus on it more than I study alone because I can watch at them who make an effort to do something, and I got the motivation. Until I study abroad, I'm going to brush up on my English while we improve together through friendly rivalry.
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I learn English for studying, the others look for a job, study a specialized field because she is a graduate student.
Not sure I understand what you mean here. Maybe leave me a comment and I can help?
      
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"The motivation" = the motivation to do *something* in particular. This one is used less often.
"Motivation" (with no article) = motivation in general, as a feeling or experience. This is used more often.
Until I study abroad, I'm going to keep brushing up on my English while we improve together through friendly rivalry.
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Nice strategy :D whatever works!
| However, some of my friends are near my living place. However, some of my friends  | 
| I study with my friends these days This sentence has been marked as perfect! | 
| I graduated from university last month, and most of my friends are scattered for work. I graduated from university last month, and most of my friends are scattered  | 
| So, I study with them every week. 
 Best not to start sentences with "so" | 
| I learn English for studying, the others look for a job, study a specialized field because she is a graduate student. I learn English for studying, the others look for a job, study a specialized field because she is a graduate student. Not sure I understand what you mean here. Maybe leave me a comment and I can help? | 
| When I study something with my friends, I can focus on it more than I study alone because I can watch at them who make an effort to do something, and I got the motivation. When I study something with my friends, I "The motivation" = the motivation to do *something* in particular. This one is used less often. "Motivation" (with no article) = motivation in general, as a feeling or experience. This is used more often. | 
| Until I study abroad, I'm going to brush up on my English while we improve together through friendly rivalry. Until I study abroad, I'm going to keep brushing up on my English while we improve together through friendly rivalry. | 
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