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April 8, 2021

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I like みたらしだんご, sweet rice dumplings on a bamboo skewer.

I like a confection called みたらしだんご(Mitarashi-Dango).
Speaking so, I didn't know much about the sweet.
According to some web source, the name "みたらし" comes from an area's name.
One skewer has 5 dumplings; this is made to look like 5 bubbles in Mitarashi No Ike pond.

About new-year season, I like visiting Fushimi Inari shrine, and, after that, I often buy some Mitarashi Dango skewers; They are delicious.


みたらし団子という甘味が好きです。
と言いながら、実は私はその甘味についてあまり詳しく知りませんでした。
ウェブの記事によると、「みたらし」という名前は、地域の名前に由来しているそうです。
1本の串に5個の団子が刺さってますが、… ←御手洗の池の、5つの泡を模しているそうです。
お正月の時期に伏見稲荷神社に行くのが好きで、その時はみたらし団子をよく買います。 おいしいのです。

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I like みたらしだんご, they are sweet rice dumplings on a bamboo skewer.

To make it clear what the dumplings are.

I like a confectiondessert called みたらしだんご(Mitarashi-Dango).

Dessert is another name for Confection. Both are correct.

Speaking sof sweets , I didn'on’t know much about the sweet.s.

I’m not sure what you were trying to state. I just tried to make it sound native

According to some web source, the name "みたらし" comes from an area's name.

One skewer has 5 dumplings; this is made to look like 5 bubbles in Mitarashi No Ike pond.

Abroutnd the new-year season, I like to visiting the Fushimi Inari shrine, and, after that. Afterwards , I often buy some Mitarashi Dango skewers; They are delicious.

I just added more words and wanted to make it sound native

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✨AMAZING✨Very little mistakes and I enjoyed learning about your culture. Thank you for sharing!!!

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akihello

April 8, 2021

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Speaking sof sweets , I didn'on’t know much about the sweet.s.

" According to some web source, the name "みたらし" comes from an area's name. "

Before I seek and read the information, I didn't know much about Mitarashi Dango despite loving the one. (However I said I love Mitarashi Dango.)

I like みたらしだんご, sweet rice dumplings on a bamboo skewer.


I like みたらしだんご, they are sweet rice dumplings on a bamboo skewer.

To make it clear what the dumplings are.

I like a confection called みたらしだんご(Mitarashi-Dango).


I like a confectiondessert called みたらしだんご(Mitarashi-Dango).

Dessert is another name for Confection. Both are correct.

Speaking so, I didn't know much about the sweet.


Speaking sof sweets , I didn'on’t know much about the sweet.s.

I’m not sure what you were trying to state. I just tried to make it sound native

According to some web source, the name "みたらし" comes from an area's name.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

One skewer has 5 dumplings; this is made to look like 5 bubbles in Mitarashi No Ike pond.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

About new-year season, I like visiting Fushimi Inari shrine, and, after that, I often buy some Mitarashi Dango skewers; They are delicious.


Abroutnd the new-year season, I like to visiting the Fushimi Inari shrine, and, after that. Afterwards , I often buy some Mitarashi Dango skewers; They are delicious.

I just added more words and wanted to make it sound native

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