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I didn't know much about jobs in the world.

When I was an elementary school student, I didn't think of what I wanted to be in the future, especially.
When I was in junior high school, I thought of becoming a programmer once.
Around that time, in the 1980s, I could get an MSX2 computer(an 8-bit computer) fortunately, and then I did programming something and playing games.
One day, I came across an article, and it said that if you want to get such a job, you should at least graduate from university.
However, I didn't love school study very much, so I couldn't bring myself to paying expensive money to study in university.
That's why I intended to work, not to school.
Having said that, I went to also high school for three years.
About the time I graduate, I thought of selling software packages as shop staff. It might be hard to build computer programs, but selling the products might be able to me.
After high school, I started to work at an electronics store. Although, what I sold is not any computer software packages, but small(portable) audio products, such as walkmans, cassette compos, and handy radio.
In the end, I enjoyed the work, and I was lucky.


小学生の頃は、将来何になりたいか、特に何も考えていませんでした。
中学生の頃は、プログラマーになりたいと思ったことがありました。
その頃、1980年代、幸いにもMSX2(8ビットコンピュータ)を手に入れることができたので、プログラミングをしたりとか、ゲームをしたりとかしていたんです。
そんなある日、ある記事を見つけました。そこには、そういう仕事に就くなら最低でも大学を卒業したほうがいい、と、書いてありました。
しかし、私は学校の勉強があまり好きではなかったので、高いお金を払ってまで大学に通う気になれませんでした。
だから、学校ではなく仕事をしようと思っていました。
そうは言っても、高校にも3年間通いました。
そして卒業する頃には、店員としてソフトの販売をするのはどうかな、と、考えました。プログラムを作るのは難しいかもしれないけど、製品を売るのなら私にもできるかもしれない、って思ったんです。
というわけで、高校卒業後は家電量販店で働き始めました。もっとも、そこで私が配属された売り場はパソコンソフトではなく、ウォークマンやカセットコンポ、ラジオなどのオーディオ機器売り場だったんですけど。
でも、最終的には仕事も楽しかったし、良かったと思っています。

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In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

When I was an elementary school student, I didn't really think ofabout what I wanted to be in the future, especially.

WOnce, when I was in junior high school, I thought of becoming a programmer once.

Around that time, in the 1980s, I fortunately could get an MSX2 computer (an 8-bit computer) fortunately, and then, I did programming somethingimes and playinged games.

One day, I came across an article, and i that said that if you want to get such a job, you should at least graduate from university.

However, I didn't love school studytudying or school very much, so I couldn't bring myself to paying the expensive money tocost of studying in university.

That's why I intended to work, not to schoolstudy.

Having said that, I also went to also high school for three years.

About the time I graduated, I thought of selling software packages as shop staffworker in a shop.

I was having trouble phrasing it because "staff" is plural.

It might be hard to build computer programs, but selling the productsI might be able to mesell the products.

After high school, I started to work at an electronics store.

Although, what I sold is not anywasn't computer software packages, but rather small (portable) audio products, such as walkmans, cassette compos, and handy radios.

In the end, I enjoyed the work, and I was lucky.

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I didn't know much about jobs in the world.


I dDidn't kKnow much aa lot About jJobs in the wWorld.

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

When I was an elementary school student, I didn't think of what I wanted to be in the future, especially.


When I was an elementary school student, I didn't really think ofabout what I wanted to be in the future, especially.

When I was in junior high school, I thought of becoming a programmer once.


WOnce, when I was in junior high school, I thought of becoming a programmer once.

Around that time, in the 1980s, I could get an MSX2 computer(an 8-bit computer) fortunately, and then I did programming something and playing games.


Around that time, in the 1980s, I fortunately could get an MSX2 computer (an 8-bit computer) fortunately, and then, I did programming somethingimes and playinged games.

One day, I came across an article, and it said that if you want to get such a job, you should at least graduate from university.


One day, I came across an article, and i that said that if you want to get such a job, you should at least graduate from university.

However, I didn't love school study very much, so I couldn't bring myself to paying expensive money to study in university.


However, I didn't love school studytudying or school very much, so I couldn't bring myself to paying the expensive money tocost of studying in university.

That's why I intended to work, not to school.


That's why I intended to work, not to schoolstudy.

Having said that, I went to also high school for three years.


Having said that, I also went to also high school for three years.

About the time I graduate, I thought of selling software packages as shop staff.


About the time I graduated, I thought of selling software packages as shop staffworker in a shop.

I was having trouble phrasing it because "staff" is plural.

It might be hard to build computer programs, but selling the products might be able to me.


It might be hard to build computer programs, but selling the productsI might be able to mesell the products.

After high school, I started to work at an electronics store.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although, what I sold is not any computer software packages, but small(portable) audio products, such as walkmans, cassette compos, and handy radio.


Although, what I sold is not anywasn't computer software packages, but rather small (portable) audio products, such as walkmans, cassette compos, and handy radios.

In the end, I enjoyed the work, and I was lucky.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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