Kindred Spirit

Oct. 24, 2025

I Can't Stop

I am swimming in a sea in the darkness.
I can't stop swimming or I'll be drowned.
I have to move, move, and keep moving.
I can't stop or I'll die.

The cold water is pressing my chest, I barely breath.
I can't see where the shore is.
All I can see is nothing but the endless sea.
All I know is that if I stop then I'll die.

I'm crying yet still keep swimming.
Water is all over my face, is it seawater or my tear?
Is it an endless sea or an endless body of tears?

Dear God, if you really exist, please help me.
I can't stop or I'll die.
I can't stop.
I can't.

Corrections

I am swimming in athe sea in the darkness.

I can't stop swimming or I'll be drowned.

The cold water is pressing against my chest, I can barely breath.

All I can see is nothing but the endless sea.

All I know is that if I stop, then I'll die.

I'm crying, yet still keep swimming.

Water is all over my face, is it seawater or my tears?

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I Can't Stop


I am swimming in a sea in the darkness.


I am swimming in athe sea in the darkness.

I can't stop swimming or I'll be drowned.


I can't stop swimming or I'll be drowned.

I have to move, move, and keep moving.


I can't stop or I'll die.


The cold water is pressing my chest, I barely breath.


The cold water is pressing against my chest, I can barely breath.

I can't see where the shore is.


All I can see is nothing but the endless sea.


All I can see is nothing but the endless sea.

All I know is that if I stop then I'll die.


All I know is that if I stop, then I'll die.

I'm crying yet still keep swimming.


I'm crying, yet still keep swimming.

Water is all over my face, is it seawater or my tear?


Water is all over my face, is it seawater or my tears?

Is it an endless sea or an endless body of tears?


I can't.


Dear God, if you really exist, please help me.


I can't stop or I'll die.


I can't stop.


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