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April 16, 2021

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I can't sleep well recently

I graduated from university, I have a lot of time by studying abroad. However, I have to do many things. At first, I have to make money for studying abroad. Studying abroad, I have to save money about 5000$. I noticed that I can't save a lot of money to do some part-time jobs, so on top of that, I have started my business which is to buy and sell something. Second, I have to brush up on my English skills. If I went to the United States, I couldn't communicate with foreign country people. So, I have started an English conversation. I enjoy communicating with different country people. I can know their culture and what they are doing now. I not only for studying abroad, but also spend time on my hobby. I love Djing, and Playing video games, Drinkin with my friends. However, when I do all things I want to do, I have no time to sleep. I'm troubled these days.

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I can't sleep well recently

I graduated from university, I have a lot of time by and now I will be going to studying abroad.

However, I have to do many things.

At fFirstly, I have to make money forso that I can studying abroad.

STo studying abroad, I have to save money about $5000$.

I notichave realized that I can't save a lot of money to dothat much money by just doing some part-time jobs, so, on top of that, I have started my own business which is toere I buy and sell somethings.

Secondly, I have to brush up on my English skills.

If I went to the United States now, I cwouldn't be able to communicate with foreign country people.

So, I have started an English conversation.

I enjoy communicating with people from different country peopleies.

I can knowlearn about their culture and what they are doing now.

IAnd not only for studying abroad, but also to spend time on my hobbyies.

I love Djing, and Pplaying video games, D and drinking with my friends.

However, when I do all the things I want to do, I have no time to sleep.

I'm troubled these days.

I can't sleep well recently


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I graduated from university, I have a lot of time by studying abroad.


I graduated from university, I have a lot of time by and now I will be going to studying abroad.

However, I have to do many things.


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At first, I have to make money for studying abroad.


At fFirstly, I have to make money forso that I can studying abroad.

Studying abroad, I have to save money about 5000$.


STo studying abroad, I have to save money about $5000$.

I noticed that I can't save a lot of money to do some part-time jobs, so on top of that, I have started my business which is to buy and sell something.


I notichave realized that I can't save a lot of money to dothat much money by just doing some part-time jobs, so, on top of that, I have started my own business which is toere I buy and sell somethings.

Second, I have to brush up on my English skills.


Secondly, I have to brush up on my English skills.

If I went to the United States, I couldn't communicate with foreign country people.


If I went to the United States now, I cwouldn't be able to communicate with foreign country people.

So, I have started an English conversation.


So, I have started an English conversation.

I enjoy communicating with different country people.


I enjoy communicating with people from different country peopleies.

I can know their culture and what they are doing now.


I can knowlearn about their culture and what they are doing now.

I not only for studying abroad, but also spend time on my hobby.


IAnd not only for studying abroad, but also to spend time on my hobbyies.

I love Djing, and Playing video games, Drinkin with my friends.


I love Djing, and Pplaying video games, D and drinking with my friends.

However, when I do all things I want to do, I have no time to sleep.


However, when I do all the things I want to do, I have no time to sleep.

I'm troubled these days.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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