May 13, 2021
I applied to a college in the United States.
I will study in the United States and enter a college on September 23. I applied to the college. I didn't realize that I'm going to go to the USA, but my departure date is coming, I'm just a little nervous and excited. In Japan, there are fewer foreigners. So I rarely get opportunities to talk with them. On the other hand, In the US, there are a lot of foreigners. I'm looking forward to talking with them. I want to learn not only English but also their culture. I will be one of the foreigners in the United states. Because of COVID-19, I heard that Asian discrimination happens in the USA. I haven't been discriminated yet, so I'm afraid of dealing with that. I may be faced with some problems, but I believe that I can develop my skills, to cope with the problems.
I applied to a college in the United States.
I will study at a college in the United States and enter a collegestarting on September 23.rd.¶
I applied to the college.
I dit hadn't realizesunk in that I'm going to go to the USA, but now that my departure date is coming up, I'm just a littlefeeling nervous and excited.
In Japan, there are fewer foreigners.
So I rarely get opportunities to talk with them.
On the other hand, In the US, there are a lot of foreigners.
I'm looking forward to talking with them.
I want to learn not only English but also theirAmerican culture.
I'm guessing by "their culture" you mean Americans, but it's hard to tell if by "foreigners in the US" you mean Americans, or people from other countries living in the US.
Because of COVID-19, II've heard that Asians are being discrimination happeed against in the USA. because of COVID-19.
I haven't've never been discriminated yeagainst, so I'm afraid of having to dealing with that.
I may be faced with some problems, but I believe that I can develop mythe skills, to cope with the problemsm.
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A large percentage of the students at my college were foreign, so you shouldn't feel out of place. I wish you all the best.
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I will study in the United States and enter a college on September 23. I will study at a college in the United States |
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I applied to the college. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I didn't realize that I'm going to go to the USA, but my departure date is coming, I'm just a little nervous and excited. I |
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In Japan, there are fewer foreigners. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I rarely get opportunities to talk with them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the other hand, In the US, there are a lot of foreigners. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm looking forward to talking with them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want to learn not only English but also their culture. I want to learn not only English but also I'm guessing by "their culture" you mean Americans, but it's hard to tell if by "foreigners in the US" you mean Americans, or people from other countries living in the US. |
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I will be one of the foreigners in the United states. |
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Because of COVID-19, I heard that Asian discrimination happens in the USA.
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I haven't been discriminated yet, so I'm afraid of dealing with that. I |
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I may be faced with some problems, but I believe that I can develop my skills, to cope with the problems. I may |
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