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April 26, 2025

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Very Quick Story

“Bonsoir, comi tali vou?” dite Kat. “Bonne,” dite Olivia.


“Hello, how are you?” said Kat. “Good”, said Olivia.

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Very Quick StoryUne histoire très courte

“Bonsoir, comi tali ment allez-vous?” dite Kat.

“Bonneien,” dite Olivia.

Very Quick StoryHistoire très courte

« Bonsoir, comi tali vou?” ditment allez-vous ? », demande Kat.

How = comment
"To be" in "how are you?" is
translated by the verb "aller"
You = vous

French quotation marks = « »

Better to use "demander" ("ask") here

“Bonne,” dite« Bien », dit/répond Olivia.

"Bon" is an adjective, "bien" is an adverb (modifying the verb "aller")

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April 26, 2025

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? I don’t understand

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April 26, 2025

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You don't understand what?

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April 26, 2025

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I don’t understand French 🤣

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April 26, 2025

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Well, good thing I made the corrections in English then...

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April 27, 2025

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Yeah

“Bonsoir, comi tali vou?” dite Kat.


« Bonsoir, comi tali vou?” ditment allez-vous ? », demande Kat.

How = comment "To be" in "how are you?" is translated by the verb "aller" You = vous French quotation marks = « » Better to use "demander" ("ask") here

“Bonsoir, comi tali ment allez-vous?” dite Kat.

“Bonne,” dite Olivia.


“Bonne,” dite« Bien », dit/répond Olivia.

"Bon" is an adjective, "bien" is an adverb (modifying the verb "aller")

“Bonneien,” dite Olivia.

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Very Quick StoryHistoire très courte

Very Quick StoryUne histoire très courte

I am going to try


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