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SummerTeaWater

March 25, 2021

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I am a tea lover

I really like to drink tea even though most of Korean like to drink coffee.

With drinking tea, I can release my stresses and feel free whenever and wherever.

There are six types of tea such as Black tea, Green tea, White tea, Yellow tea, Oorong tea and Pu'er tea and I like all of them.

When I learned very first time, my teacher recommaned me that comparing different types of tea in order to get insteresting

For example, White and Green tea are to drink in the morning and Black and Oorong tea are fine in the afternoon.

When it is raining, Pu're tea is good and if you want to drink rare one, Yellow tea is the best choise.

Do you know the tastes of Green tea are different depending on Country of origin?

I like three Green teas in one day that made by China, Japan and Korea.

If you have a chance, I recommand to drink a tea like my way


대부분의 한국인들이 커피를 좋아함에도 불구하고 저는 차 마시는 것을 진짜 좋아합니다.

차를 마실 때, 저는 스트레스를 해소할 수 있고 언제 어디서든 자유를 느끼게 됩니다

6가지의 차 종류가 있는데, 홍차, 녹차, 백차, 황차, 우롱차 그리고 보이차가 그것입니다. 저는 모두 다 좋아합니다

제가 처음 차를 배울 때, 저의 선생님이 추천해 준 것으로는 다른 종류의 차를 비교하며 마시면 흥미를 가질 수 있다는 것입니다.

예를 든다면, 백차와 녹차는 아침에 마시고, 홍차와 우롱차를 오후에 먹으면 좋습니다.

비가 올때는 보이차가 좋고, 만약 특별한 차를 마시고 싶다면 황차가 최고입니다.

녹차의 맛은 원산지에 따라 다르다는 걸 아시나요?

저는 하루 동안 세가지 녹차를 마시는 걸 좋아하는데, 중국산, 일본산 그리고 한국산 녹차입니다.

만약 기회가 있다면, 저와 같은 방법으로 차를 마시는 걸 추천합니다

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I am a tea lover

I really like to drink tea even though most of Koreans like to drink coffee.

either "most Koreans like to drink coffee" or "most of Korea likes to drink coffee" is correct.

WithBy drinking tea, I can release my stresses and feel free whenever and wherever.

There are six types of tea such as Black tea, Green tea, White tea, Yellow tea, Oorong tea and Pu'er tea and I like all of them.

tea types do not need to be capitalized

When I learned veryfor the first time, my teacher recommaned me thatended comparing different types of tea in order to get me insterestinged

For example, White and Green tea are to drink in the morning and Black and Oorong tea are fine in the afternoon.

tea types (white, green) don't need to be capitalized

When it is raining, Pu're tea is good and if you want to drink a rare one, Yellow tea is the best choisce.

Doid you know that the tastes of Green tea areis different depending on Country of origin?

I like three Green teas in one day that made byin China, Japan and Korea.

If you have a chance, I recommaend to drink aing tea like my way

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SummerTeaWater

March 26, 2021

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Thanks for your correction and cheering me up :)

I am a tea lover

I really like to drink tea even though most of Koreans like to drink coffee.

Withhile drinking tea, I can release my stresses and feel free whenever and wherever.

"my" in this case is unnecessary, it is implied.

There are six types of tea such as: Black tea, Green tea, White tea, Yellow tea, Oorong tea and Pu'er tea and I like all of them.

"such as" is a term meant to give examples from a larger group. But here you listed all the possibilities, so "such as" is not appropriate in this sentence.

WThen I learned very first time I learned about tea, my teacher recommaned meended that I comparinge different types of tea in order to getmake insteresting insights.

For example, White and Green tea are tofor drinking in the morning and Black and Oorong tea are fine in the afternoon.

When it is raining, Pu're tea is good and i. If you want to drink a rare onetea, Yellow tea is the best choisce.

It is slightly ambiguous what "one" in "rare one" refers to.

Do you know the tastes of Green tea are different depending upon Cthe country of origin?

I like three Green teas I tasted in one day that, made byin China, Japan and Korea.

If you have a chance, I recommaend toyou drink a tea like my way.

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SummerTeaWater

March 26, 2021

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Thank you very much

I am a tea lover

I really like to drink tea even though most of Koreans like to drink coffee.

WithBy drinking tea, I can release my stresses and feel free whenever and wherever.

"stress" is uncountable

There are six types of tea such as B– black tea, Ggreen tea, Wwhite tea, Yyellow tea, Ooroolong tea, and Ppu'er tea and I like all of them.

When I learned about this the very first time, my teacher recommaned me thatended comparing different types of tea in order to get inskeep things interesting.

Another idiom/collocation that could work well here: "change things up."
"I like trying new types of tea to change things up a bit."
Something like that.
You recommend something TO someone. But a lot of the time, you can omit the "someone" part if the context makes it clear who has received the recommendation.

For example, Wwhite and Ggreen tea are best to drink in the morning, and Bblack and Ooroolong tea are finpreferable in the afternoon.

When it is raining, Pu're tea is good, and if you want to drink a rare one, Yyellow tea is the best choisce.

Do you know the tastes of Ggreen tea are different depending on Cthe country of origin?

I like three Ggreen teas in one day that made byfrom China, Japan, and Korea.

Not clear what you mean by "in one day" - you drink all three of these teas over the course of one day?

If you have a chance, I recommaend to drink aing tea like mythis way.

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SummerTeaWater

March 26, 2021

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Thank you for your comment!

I am a tea lover


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I really like to drink tea even though most of Korean like to drink coffee.


I really like to drink tea even though most of Koreans like to drink coffee.

I really like to drink tea even though most of Koreans like to drink coffee.

I really like to drink tea even though most of Koreans like to drink coffee.

either "most Koreans like to drink coffee" or "most of Korea likes to drink coffee" is correct.

With drinking tea, I can release my stresses and feel free whenever and wherever.


WithBy drinking tea, I can release my stresses and feel free whenever and wherever.

"stress" is uncountable

Withhile drinking tea, I can release my stresses and feel free whenever and wherever.

"my" in this case is unnecessary, it is implied.

WithBy drinking tea, I can release my stresses and feel free whenever and wherever.

There are six types of tea such as Black tea, Green tea, White tea, Yellow tea, Oorong tea and Pu'er tea and I like all of them.


There are six types of tea such as B– black tea, Ggreen tea, Wwhite tea, Yyellow tea, Ooroolong tea, and Ppu'er tea and I like all of them.

There are six types of tea such as: Black tea, Green tea, White tea, Yellow tea, Oorong tea and Pu'er tea and I like all of them.

"such as" is a term meant to give examples from a larger group. But here you listed all the possibilities, so "such as" is not appropriate in this sentence.

There are six types of tea such as Black tea, Green tea, White tea, Yellow tea, Oorong tea and Pu'er tea and I like all of them.

tea types do not need to be capitalized

When I learned very first time, it is the best way to get insteresting that comparing different types of tea.


For example, White and Green tea are to drink in the morning and Black and Oorong tea are fine in the afternoon.


For example, Wwhite and Ggreen tea are best to drink in the morning, and Bblack and Ooroolong tea are finpreferable in the afternoon.

For example, White and Green tea are tofor drinking in the morning and Black and Oorong tea are fine in the afternoon.

For example, White and Green tea are to drink in the morning and Black and Oorong tea are fine in the afternoon.

tea types (white, green) don't need to be capitalized

When it is raining, Pu're tea is good and if you want to drink rare one, Yellow tea is the best choise.


When it is raining, Pu're tea is good, and if you want to drink a rare one, Yyellow tea is the best choisce.

When it is raining, Pu're tea is good and i. If you want to drink a rare onetea, Yellow tea is the best choisce.

It is slightly ambiguous what "one" in "rare one" refers to.

When it is raining, Pu're tea is good and if you want to drink a rare one, Yellow tea is the best choisce.

The tastes of Green tea are different depending on Country of origin.


I like three Green teas in one day that made by China, Japan and Korea.


I like three Ggreen teas in one day that made byfrom China, Japan, and Korea.

Not clear what you mean by "in one day" - you drink all three of these teas over the course of one day?

I like three Green teas I tasted in one day that, made byin China, Japan and Korea.

I like three Green teas in one day that made byin China, Japan and Korea.

If you have a chance, I recommand to drink a tea like my way


If you have a chance, I recommaend to drink aing tea like mythis way.

If you have a chance, I recommaend toyou drink a tea like my way.

If you have a chance, I recommaend to drink aing tea like my way

When I learned very first time, my teacher recommaned me that it is the best way to get insteresting that comparing different types of tea.


When I learned very first time, my teacher recommaned me that comparing different types of tea in order to get insteresting


When I learned about this the very first time, my teacher recommaned me thatended comparing different types of tea in order to get inskeep things interesting.

Another idiom/collocation that could work well here: "change things up." "I like trying new types of tea to change things up a bit." Something like that. You recommend something TO someone. But a lot of the time, you can omit the "someone" part if the context makes it clear who has received the recommendation.

WThen I learned very first time I learned about tea, my teacher recommaned meended that I comparinge different types of tea in order to getmake insteresting insights.

When I learned veryfor the first time, my teacher recommaned me thatended comparing different types of tea in order to get me insterestinged

Do you know the tastes of Green tea are different depending on Country of origin?


Do you know the tastes of Ggreen tea are different depending on Cthe country of origin?

Do you know the tastes of Green tea are different depending upon Cthe country of origin?

Doid you know that the tastes of Green tea areis different depending on Country of origin?

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