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Jack

April 2, 2021

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Huang Mountain

Huang Mountain is located in the southern part of Anhui province, and I am from Anhui too, so I am very proud to be an Anhui person. So far I have only been to Huang Mountain once. Back in 1997, on summer vacation, my wife, my son and I visited Huang mountain. I remember that the first day when we arrived, it rained heavily. We lived in a small hotel which is located on half of the mountain, and it seemed everywhere was wet. But the scenery is really amazing. Such as Welcoming Pine, Flying Stone, Guangmingding, a line of sky and so on. In conclusion, everywhere is a scenic spot and each season has its own beauty. This is Huang Mountain, a stunning mountain! Later on, although I passed there several times, I never visited it again. Hopefully one day, I have plenty of time, then I'd like to give it a thorough visit. I believe it must be changed a lot more than before.

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Huang Mountain

Huang Mountain is located in the southern part of Anhui province, and I am from Anhui too, so I am very proud to be an Anhui person.

So far, I have only been to Huang Mountain once.

Back in 1997, on summer vacation, my wife, my son and I visited Huang mountain.

I remember that the first day when we arrived, it rained heavily.

We livstayed in a small hotel which iwas located on half of the mountain, and it seemed everywhere was wet.

I'm not sure what you mean by "was located on half of the mountain." Did you mean half the hotel was on the mountain or that the hotel was only on one half of the mountain?

But the scenery iwas really amazing.

If you are still talking about your trip, then this should be past tense.

Such asome views included Welcoming Pine, Flying Stone, Guangmingding, a line of sky and so on.

In conclusion, everywhere is a scenic spot, and each season has its own beauty.

This is Huang Mountain, a stunning mountain!

Later on, although I passed thereby several times, I never visited it again.

Hopefully oOne day, when I have plenty of time, then I'd like to give it a thorough visit.

I believe it must bhave changed a lot more thanfrom before.

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Jack

April 5, 2021

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We livstayed in a small hotel which iwas located on half of the mountain, and it seemed everywhere was wet.

Located on the half way up the mountain. Is it right to express this way?

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Jack

April 5, 2021

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Thank you very much. If you want learn some Chinese, I definitely can give you some help.

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heavensblade13

April 5, 2021

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Located on the half way up the mountain. Is it right to express this way?

With that in mind, I would write something like: "We stayed in a small hotel located halfway up the mountain, and it seemed everywhere was wet."

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Jack

April 5, 2021

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Thank you very much. You are very kind and helpful.

Huang Mountain


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Huang Mountain is located in the southern part of Anhui province, and I am from Anhui too, so I am very proud to be an Anhui person.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So far I have only been to Huang Mountain once.


So far, I have only been to Huang Mountain once.

Back in 1997, on summer vacation, my wife, my son and I visited Huang mountain.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I remember that the first day when we arrived, it rained heavily.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We lived in a small hotel which is located on half of the mountain, and it seemed everywhere was wet.


We livstayed in a small hotel which iwas located on half of the mountain, and it seemed everywhere was wet.

I'm not sure what you mean by "was located on half of the mountain." Did you mean half the hotel was on the mountain or that the hotel was only on one half of the mountain?

But the scenery is really amazing.


But the scenery iwas really amazing.

If you are still talking about your trip, then this should be past tense.

Such as Welcoming Pine, Flying Stone, Guangmingding, a line of sky and so on.


Such asome views included Welcoming Pine, Flying Stone, Guangmingding, a line of sky and so on.

In conclusion, everywhere is a scenic spot and each season has its own beauty.


In conclusion, everywhere is a scenic spot, and each season has its own beauty.

This is Huang Mountain, a stunning mountain!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Later on, although I passed there several times, I never visited it again.


Later on, although I passed thereby several times, I never visited it again.

Hopefully one day, I have plenty of time, then I'd like to give it a thorough visit.


Hopefully oOne day, when I have plenty of time, then I'd like to give it a thorough visit.

I believe it must be changed a lot more than before.


I believe it must bhave changed a lot more thanfrom before.

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