April 8, 2021
How to spend time with my family members
Most of the time, my kids go to school and my wife and I work on weekdays.
Therefore, we can meet early in the morning or after sunset.
After eating dinner, we usually have a conversion about what to do at the school or the office.
If the weather is nice, we take a walk in the park near my house.
On the weekend, we can spend together riding bicycle, going to the library or watching a movie.
Because of COVID-19, it is hard to go shopping malls, but my wife really really like to go there.
I agree that it is different between buying goods online or buying them at the big stores.
I assume that we love the environment that makes by people and goods in the store.
I never get the feeling online stores.
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Very good!!! Very little Grammer mistakes!!!
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April 8, 2021
I am native English speaker and you write better than me 😭😭😭
April 8, 2021
Thank you for your correction.
Although I can write them, I can’t use them when I talk other people. T_T.
So my goal is to remember all these sentences and speak them. ^^
April 8, 2021
It be like that sometimes bro 😭😭😭. Keep practicing you’ll get it!!!
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Great work! Pretty much only stylistic corrections.
April 8, 2021
Thank you so much! Your corrections teach me how to use sentences more naturally.
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How to spend time with my family members
How This seems to be you writing about how you spend time with your family. So I changed it to I to make it more clear |
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Most of the time, my kids go to school and my wife and I work on weekdays.
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Therefore, we can meet early in the morning or after sunset. Therefore, we This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After eating dinner, we usually have a conversion about what to do at the school or the office. After eating dinner, we usually have a conversation about what After eating dinner, we usually I simplified the sentence. To make it sound not as wordy |
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If the weather is nice, we take a walk in the park near my house. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the weekend, we can spend together riding bicycle, going to the library or watching a movie. On the weekend, we On the weekends, we can spend time together by riding bi |
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Because of COVID-19, it is hard to go shopping malls, but my wife really really like to go there. Because of COVID-19, Because of COVID-19, it is hard to go |
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I agree that it is different between buying goods online or buying them at the big stores. I agree that it is different I agree that Made the sentence flow better p |
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I assume that we love the environment that makes by people and goods in the store. I |
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I never get the feeling online stores. I never get the same feeling |
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