May 19, 2025
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It's hard to find friends online (I have a few because I got lucky), but I wish you luck
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How to make friends of overseas
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I agree with you that it's a little harder to make friends online. I hope you get to make some great friends though!
Good attempt. Your message was clear. Keep going!
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