Sept. 26, 2025
How tidy your room?
My room is relatively tidy, but totally my house is messy a little. Although I've been trying to not buy unnecessary things, I have really no idea why there are a lot of things in my house. Please tell me your tips and tricks to tidy up your room and keep it.
How tidy your room?
My room is relatively tidy, but totally my house is messdefinitely a little messy.
Although I've been trying to not buy unnecessary things, I have really no idea why there are a lot of thingsso many in my house.
“so many” sounds a more natural, the sentence was already pefectly understandable though!
Please tell me your tips and tricks to tidy up your room and keep it that way.
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Good job!
I keep my room clean just by having a place for everything. If you let things like clothes or trash pile up, it can get messy fast.
Sept. 26, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
When I'm thinking about sentences, I tend to use certain words, which makes them monotonous.
I thought simpler was better, but perhaps it would be better to try out different ways of expression for the sake of my studies.
Sept. 27, 2025
One of my favorite things about english is how many different ways there are to say something. Once you get comfortable, sentences become very flexible. Keep up the good work!
My room is relatively tidy, but totoverally, my house is messy a little messy.
Although I've been trying to not to buy unnecessary things, I have really no idea why there are a lot of things in my house.
Another more natural flow is: "I really have no idea why there are so many things in my house even though I've been trying not to buy unnecessary things."
Please tell me your tips and tricks on how to tidy up your room and keep it tidy.
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Overall, quite good but a few small corrections!
Sept. 26, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
When I'm thinking about sentences, I tend to use certain words, which makes them monotonous.
I thought simpler was better, but perhaps it would be better to try out different ways of expression for the sake of my studies.
My room is relatively tidy, but totoverally, my house is messy a little messy.
Speaking as a whole / in total = overall
Although I've been trying to not to buy unnecessary thingsstuff, I have really no idea why there are a lot of things in my housea lot of things in my house and I really have no idea why.
More natural and easier to understand.
Replaced one "things" with "stuff" to avoid repetition
Please tell me your tips and tricks to tidy up your room and keep it that way.
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Great job.
A good tip is, "don't put it down, put it away." For example, when you are tempted to put something on the nearest table temporarily, instead force yourself to put the item where it belongs as this is generally only going to take a few more seconds.
Sept. 26, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
When I'm thinking about sentences, I tend to use certain words, which makes them monotonous.
I thought simpler was better, but perhaps it would be better to try out different ways of expression for the sake of my studies.
How tidy is your room?
My room is relatively tidy, but totoverally my house is messy a little messy.
Although I've been trying to not to buy unnecessary things, I have really no idea why there are a lot of things in my house.
Please tell me your tips and tricks to tidy up your room and keep it.
Sept. 26, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
When I'm thinking about sentences, I tend to use certain words, which makes them monotonous.
I thought simpler was better, but perhaps it would be better to try out different ways of expression for the sake of my studies.
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