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TOMO_o

June 16, 2025

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How old do people think you are?

People usually guess my age correctly. I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be nice silver man with skin care like vintage wine. Daily accumulation is very important.

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I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to become a nice silver man with skin care, and age like vintage wine.

You normally wouldn't refer to specific parts of your skin like that. Better to say "taking care of my face" or "taking care of my skin"

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People generally seem to assume I'm younger than I am, I often get asked "am I studying?" as people seem to think I'm a student, though I graduated like 12 years ago now...

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TOMO_o

June 18, 2025

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Thank you for the very detailed correction.

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be nice silver man withhave glowing skin with (regular) skin care, like vintage wine.

Interesting choice of words: vintage wine!

Daily accumulationeveloping a daily habit is very important.

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TOMO_o

June 18, 2025

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Thank you for the very detailed correction.

How old do people think you are?

People usually guess my age correctly.

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be nice silver man with skin carhaired man and age like vfintage wine.

to 'age like fine wine' means that you will look better as you grow older :)

Daily accumulationskincare is very important.

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Good job!!

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TOMO_o

June 18, 2025

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Thank you for the very detailed correction.

How old do people think you are?

People usually guess my age correctly.

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be nice silver man with skin care like vintage wine.

Daily accumulation is very importantTaking care of your skin with high-quality skincare is crucial.

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TOMO_o

June 18, 2025

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Thank you for the very detailed correction.

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marblemenow

June 18, 2025

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You're welcome.

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How old do people think you are?

People usually guess my age correctly.

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be ablit would be nice to be nicea silver man with skin carefox aging like vfintage wine.

Daily accumulationmaintenance is very important.

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Fantastic!

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TOMO_o

June 18, 2025

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Thank you for the very detailed correction.

How old do people think you are?

People usually guess my age correctly.

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be a nice silver man with skin care like vintagehaired man aging like a wine.

Rephrased it a bit.

Daily accumulationskincare is very important.

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TOMO_o

June 18, 2025

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Thank you for the very detailed correction.

How old do people think you are?


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I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be nice silver man with skin care like vintage wine.


I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be a nice silver man with skin care like vintagehaired man aging like a wine.

Rephrased it a bit.

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be ablit would be nice to be nicea silver man with skin carefox aging like vfintage wine.

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be nice silver man with skin care like vintage wine.

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be nice silver man with skin carhaired man and age like vfintage wine.

to 'age like fine wine' means that you will look better as you grow older :)

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to be nice silver man withhave glowing skin with (regular) skin care, like vintage wine.

Interesting choice of words: vintage wine!

I've been taking care of my face skin recently because I think I might be able to become a nice silver man with skin care, and age like vintage wine.

You normally wouldn't refer to specific parts of your skin like that. Better to say "taking care of my face" or "taking care of my skin"

Daily accumulation is very important.


Daily accumulationskincare is very important.

Daily accumulationmaintenance is very important.

Daily accumulation is very importantTaking care of your skin with high-quality skincare is crucial.

Daily accumulationskincare is very important.

Daily accumulationeveloping a daily habit is very important.

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