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TOMO_o

Aug. 28, 2025

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How many times have you moved?

My family moved from one side of the city to the other side when I was 14, and we've lived here even now. I think moving to other place is fun because there are some shops I've never seen before. Although packing is troublesome, I want to move soon.

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How many times have you moved?

My family moved from one side of the city to the other side when I was 14, and {we've lived here since then | we still live here even now}.

I think moving to another place is fun because there are some shops I've never seen before.

Although packing is troublesome, I want to move soon.

This is fine — “but” isn’t necessary.

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I’ve moved at least 24 times during the past five decades. 😅 Packing is never fun, but I agree, getting to know a new place is exciting.

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TOMO_o

Aug. 28, 2025

29

Thank you very much for the careful corrections.
It's amazing that you've moved so many times.
I'll try to express it more naturally.

My family moved from one side of the city to the other side when I was 14, and we've lived here even now.

When I was 14, my family decided to move from one side of the city to the another, and we've been living here even now.

I think moving from one place to other place is fun because there are some shops I', which I have never seen before.

Although packing is troublesome, but I want to move soon.

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Nice

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TOMO_o

Aug. 28, 2025

29

Thank you very much for your careful corrections. I will try to make the expression more natural.

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Mvirk545

Aug. 29, 2025

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😊❤️👍🏻

How many times have you moved?


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Although packing is troublesome, I want to move soon.


Although packing is troublesome, but I want to move soon.

Although packing is troublesome, I want to move soon.

This is fine — “but” isn’t necessary.

My family moved from one side of the city to the other side when I was 14, and we've lived here even now.


My family moved from one side of the city to the other side when I was 14, and we've lived here even now.

When I was 14, my family decided to move from one side of the city to the another, and we've been living here even now.

My family moved from one side of the city to the other side when I was 14, and {we've lived here since then | we still live here even now}.

I think moving to other place is fun because there are some shops I've never seen before.


I think moving from one place to other place is fun because there are some shops I', which I have never seen before.

I think moving to another place is fun because there are some shops I've never seen before.

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