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TOMO_o

Dec. 25, 2025

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How many credit cards do you have?

I have three credit cards, two of them are mine to use to ordinary shopping, and one of them is my company’s one. There are many points services with some apps or cards, so I often register those services. It’s very difficult to write household account book, though.

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How many credit cards do you have?

I have three credit cards, two of them are mine to use tofor ordinary shopping, and one of them is my company’s one card.

"company card" is a more common and fast way to say that.

There are many points services with some apps or cards, so I often register for those services.

It’s very difficult to write household account book,Similar idea? It's difficult to keep track of my budget though.

I have a rough ideas of what you're saying, but it's a bit confusing and dated (old way of saying something). Here's a more natural way

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Really good job!

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TOMO_o

Jan. 4, 2026

125

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I tried to write it simply, but there are still some parts that sound strange.

I have three credit cards, two of them are mine to use tofor ordinary shopping, and one of them is my company’s one.

There are many points services with somefor earning points through apps or cards, so I often register for those services.

I think this is what you mean?

It’s very difficult to writekeep a household account book, though.

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A topic that most people can relate to.

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TOMO_o

Dec. 26, 2025

125

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I tried to write it simply, but there are still some parts that sound strange.

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Liag

Dec. 26, 2025

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That is to be expected because the structure of the two languages is different. You will choose more natural ways to express yourself in English more often as your familiarity with the language grows. In the meantime, you are using this platform very efficiently to challenge yourself and expand your knowledge and understanding of English.

I have three credit cards, two of them are mine to use tofor ordinary shopping, and one of them is my company’s onecard.

There are many points system services with some apps and/or cards, so I often register for those services.

It’s very difficult to writekeep a household account book, though.

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TOMO_o

Dec. 25, 2025

125

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I tried to write it simply, but there are still some parts that sound strange.

I have three credit cards, two of them are mine tohat I use tofor ordinary shopping, and one of them is myfrom the company’s one.

Sounds more natural like this, sorry for bad explanation

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TOMO_o

Dec. 25, 2025

125

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I tried to write it simply, but there are still some parts that sound strange.

How many credit cards do you have?


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I have three credit cards, two of them are mine to use to ordinary shopping, and one of them is my company’s one.


I have three credit cards, two of them are mine tohat I use tofor ordinary shopping, and one of them is myfrom the company’s one.

Sounds more natural like this, sorry for bad explanation

I have three credit cards, two of them are mine to use tofor ordinary shopping, and one of them is my company’s onecard.

I have three credit cards, two of them are mine to use tofor ordinary shopping, and one of them is my company’s one.

I have three credit cards, two of them are mine to use tofor ordinary shopping, and one of them is my company’s one card.

"company card" is a more common and fast way to say that.

There are many points services with some apps or cards, so I often register those services.


There are many points system services with some apps and/or cards, so I often register for those services.

There are many points services with somefor earning points through apps or cards, so I often register for those services.

I think this is what you mean?

There are many points services with some apps or cards, so I often register for those services.

It’s very difficult to write household account book, though.


It’s very difficult to writekeep a household account book, though.

It’s very difficult to writekeep a household account book, though.

It’s very difficult to write household account book,Similar idea? It's difficult to keep track of my budget though.

I have a rough ideas of what you're saying, but it's a bit confusing and dated (old way of saying something). Here's a more natural way

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