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How learning to read changes lives ?

In a recent 6 minute English transmission, I discovered that more than 700 milions peoples are illiterate, they can't read or write. And, this problem is not new because there was the same problem since 1960. The problem is from child who doon't go to school. In 2 different contries, the UK and the Bangladesh, they tried to involve Projects to limit the increase of illiterate. In Bangladesh, a mother said that she was illiterate so she couldn't sign her papers so she had use the fingerprint. She didn't go to school so she didn't know add numbers and she was swindle by the shop assistant. Another man, in the UK, said that when he was young he had big difficulties and he never learnt writting and reading. When he received letters, he knocked on in his neighbour's door in order to understand what it was wroten.
Thanks for reading !

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How learning to read changes lives ?

In a recent 6 minute English transmission, I discovered that more than 700 milions peoples are illiterate, they can't read or write.

And, this problem is not new because there whas been the same problem since 1960.

The problem is from child who doon'caused by children not going to school.

In 2 different countries, the UK and the Bangladesh, they tried to involve Projects to limit thehave had initiatives to increase of illiteratecy.

In Bangladesh, a mother said that she was illiterate, so she couldn't sign her papers, so she had to use ther fingerprint.

She didn't go to school so she didn't know how to add numbers and she was swindle by the shop assistant.

Another man, in the UK, said that when he was young he had big difficulties and he never learnted writting and reading.

When he received letters, he knocked on in his neighbour's door in order to understand what it was wroitten.

Thanks for reading !

In a recent 6 -minute English transmission, I discovered that more than 700 millions peoples are illiterate, they can't read or write.

6 and minute work best with a hyphen. "millions" cannot be plural if there is a quantity in front of it already. Milion should have a double l. Peoples will become people because "people" is already plural, so -s is useless.

And, this problem is not new because thereis was the same problem since 1960.

"This" would be more relevant because we also have "since" so it is still occurring and there is past tense so it would contradict.

The problem is fromwith children who doon't go to school.

"From" is incorrect because they didn't cause the problem; they are affected by the problem. Child is one, and it talks about only one child, but we are talking about kids as a whole, so in the plural form "children" would be correct. Spelling error in don't

In 2 different countries, the UK and the Bangladesh, they tried to involvemplement Projects to limit the increase of illiterate.cy

Wrong spelling of country. "The Bangladesh" is incorrect because "the" does not come before countries unless the country's name has "the" like "The USA". Projects should be lowercase because it is not in the beginning of the sentence. "Illiterate" should become "Illiteracy" because we cannot feel it so it is an abstract noun.

In Bangladesh, a mother said that she was illiterate, so she couldn't sign her papers, so she had to use ther fingerprint.

Comma use should be there, "to use" instead of "use" and "her fingerprint" instead of "the" because we are talking about the woman.

She didn't go to school, so she didn't know how to add numbers, and she was swindled by the shop assistant.

Comma to connect clauses, "add" should be "how to add", comma before and and so, she was swindled because it is in the past

Another man, in the UK, said that when he was young, he had big difficulties, and he never learnt writting and reading.

No comma in the beginning. Comma after young, writing instead of writting

When he received letters, he knocked on in his neighbour's door in order to understand what it was wroitten.

"In on" should only be on. "in order to" can simplify to "to", Wroten is a spelling mistake, and it should be written.

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In a recent 6 minute English transmission, I discovered that more than 700 milions peoples are illiterate, they can't read or write.


In a recent 6 -minute English transmission, I discovered that more than 700 millions peoples are illiterate, they can't read or write.

6 and minute work best with a hyphen. "millions" cannot be plural if there is a quantity in front of it already. Milion should have a double l. Peoples will become people because "people" is already plural, so -s is useless.

In a recent 6 minute English transmission, I discovered that more than 700 milions peoples are illiterate, they can't read or write.

And, this problem is not new because there was the same problem since 1960.


And, this problem is not new because thereis was the same problem since 1960.

"This" would be more relevant because we also have "since" so it is still occurring and there is past tense so it would contradict.

And, this problem is not new because there whas been the same problem since 1960.

The problem is from child who doon't go to school.


The problem is fromwith children who doon't go to school.

"From" is incorrect because they didn't cause the problem; they are affected by the problem. Child is one, and it talks about only one child, but we are talking about kids as a whole, so in the plural form "children" would be correct. Spelling error in don't

The problem is from child who doon'caused by children not going to school.

In 2 different contries, the UK and the Bangladesh, they tried to involve Projects to limit the increase of illiterate.


In 2 different countries, the UK and the Bangladesh, they tried to involvemplement Projects to limit the increase of illiterate.cy

Wrong spelling of country. "The Bangladesh" is incorrect because "the" does not come before countries unless the country's name has "the" like "The USA". Projects should be lowercase because it is not in the beginning of the sentence. "Illiterate" should become "Illiteracy" because we cannot feel it so it is an abstract noun.

In 2 different countries, the UK and the Bangladesh, they tried to involve Projects to limit thehave had initiatives to increase of illiteratecy.

In Bangladesh, a mother said that she was illiterate so she couldn't sign her papers so she had use the fingerprint.


In Bangladesh, a mother said that she was illiterate, so she couldn't sign her papers, so she had to use ther fingerprint.

Comma use should be there, "to use" instead of "use" and "her fingerprint" instead of "the" because we are talking about the woman.

In Bangladesh, a mother said that she was illiterate, so she couldn't sign her papers, so she had to use ther fingerprint.

She didn't go to school so she didn't know add numbers and she was swindle by the shop assistant.


She didn't go to school, so she didn't know how to add numbers, and she was swindled by the shop assistant.

Comma to connect clauses, "add" should be "how to add", comma before and and so, she was swindled because it is in the past

She didn't go to school so she didn't know how to add numbers and she was swindle by the shop assistant.

Another man, in the UK, said that when he was young he had big difficulties and he never learnt writting and reading.


Another man, in the UK, said that when he was young, he had big difficulties, and he never learnt writting and reading.

No comma in the beginning. Comma after young, writing instead of writting

Another man, in the UK, said that when he was young he had big difficulties and he never learnted writting and reading.

When he received letters, he knocked on in his neighbour's door in order to understand what it was wroten.


When he received letters, he knocked on in his neighbour's door in order to understand what it was wroitten.

"In on" should only be on. "in order to" can simplify to "to", Wroten is a spelling mistake, and it should be written.

When he received letters, he knocked on in his neighbour's door in order to understand what it was wroitten.

Thanks for reading !


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