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Ladia

April 11, 2021

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How I Use Received Corrections

I always go through the corrections once I receive them. I stop at each one of them, and I make sure that I understand why it was corrected that way. Most of the time, I immediately realize what was wrong. But sometimes, I further discuss the mistake with the corrector. After some time, I read my old journals to see the corrections again. Seeing them more than once helps to remember the correct phrases. If I were a beginner, I would undoubtedly write the mistakes and vocabulary on paper.

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How I Use Received Corrections

I always go through the corrections once I receive them.

I stop at each one of them, and I make sure that I understand why it was corrected that way.

Most of the time, I immediately realize what was wrong.

But sometimes, I further discuss the mistake with the corrector.

After some time, I read my old journals to see the corrections again.

Seeing them more than once helps me to remember the correct phrases.

At least, I *think* this is incorrect. Certainly my suggestion is definitely correct. Or "helps you to remember", "helps in/with remembering".

If I were a beginner, I would undoubtedly write the mistakes and vocabulary on paper.

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You've made an elementary error here: how can you possibly apply this process if you don't make any mistakes?! :)

Oh, no, wait, I see one. "helps me to remember". Massive.

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Ladia

April 11, 2021

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Seeing them more than once helps me to remember the correct phrases.

Thank you for the suggestions!
I didn't include "me" because I meant the sentence as a general truth.

From the Cambridge dictionary:
"If something or someone helps to do something, that thing or person is one of several reasons for it happening:
Example: The drought has helped (to) make this a disastrous year for Somalia."

I believe the same structure is applicable to my sentence as well.
But I agree that it feels unnatural in the given context.

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Ladia

April 11, 2021

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Thank you for correcting my journal! Next time, I'll try harder to make more mistakes! :)

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secretpostman

April 12, 2021

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Yeah, there's many many contexts you can do that in. That's why I wasn't even sure it was incorrect :) Just feels weird with "to remember".

Generic you is very useful for making sentences like that applicable as general truths.

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I stop at each one of them, and I make sure that I understand why it was corrected that way.


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Most of the time, I immediately realize what was wrong.


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But sometimes, I further discuss the mistake with the corrector.


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After some time, I read my old journals to see the corrections again.


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Seeing them more than once helps to remember the correct phrases.


Seeing them more than once helps me to remember the correct phrases.

At least, I *think* this is incorrect. Certainly my suggestion is definitely correct. Or "helps you to remember", "helps in/with remembering".

If I were a beginner, I would undoubtedly write the mistakes and vocabulary on paper.


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