Sept. 19, 2025
How can you be a better person ?
I am sixteen years old and I'm wondering "How can I be a better person?". I think it's important because it give you an objective every day, you know you want to the best version of yourself. I think that if you want to be a better person, you must have a good routine. It's the little actions you do everyday that will make you better. Sport is really important so you can go to the gym or work out at home to keep yourself healthy or also practice sport with friends. The school is really important too so you must study everyday and not wait the day of the exams to learn your lessons. Playing music could be nice too because it's really relaxing and it can help you to meet other people. I think if you work hard every day, it will give you an advantage by other people.
Thanks for reading !
I am sixteen years old and I'm wondering, "How can I be a better person?".
Quotation marks are not needed
I think it's important because it gives you an objective every day, you know you want to be the best version of yourself.
He/she/it = add an S to the end of the verb (in most cases)
The word “objective” sounds a little unnatural, but it works
Sport iss are really important so you can go, like going to the gym or working out at home to keep yourself healthy, or also practiceing sport with friends.
1. When referring to sports, we make the noun plural
2. It sounds better if you remove “so you can go”
The sSchool is really important too so you must study everyday and not wait until the day of the exams to learn your lessonsthe material.
1. “The” is not needed in this context
2. The word “until” is missing
3. “Your lessons” sounds odd, and “the material” sounds more natural
Playing music could be nice too because it's really relaxing and it can help you to meet other people.
I think if you work hard every day, it will give you an advantage byover other people.
Thanks for reading !
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Your writing is very clear, just unnatural sounding in some areas. Keep it up :D
Sept. 20, 2025
Thanks for your correction !
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How can you be a better person ? |
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I am sixteen years old and I'm wondering "How can I be a better person?". I am sixteen years old and I'm wondering, Quotation marks are not needed |
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I think it's important because it give you an objective every day, you know you want to the best version of yourself. I think it's important because it gives you an objective every day, you know you want to be the best version of yourself. He/she/it = add an S to the end of the verb (in most cases) The word “objective” sounds a little unnatural, but it works |
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I think that if you want to be a better person, you must have a good routine. |
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It's the little actions you do everyday that will make you better. |
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Sport is really important so you can go to the gym or work out at home to keep yourself healthy or also practice sport with friends. Sport 1. When referring to sports, we make the noun plural 2. It sounds better if you remove “so you can go” |
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The school is really important too so you must study everyday and not wait the day of the exams to learn your lessons.
1. “The” is not needed in this context 2. The word “until” is missing 3. “Your lessons” sounds odd, and “the material” sounds more natural |
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Playing music could be nice too because it's really relaxing and it can help you to meet other people. Playing music could be nice too because it's really relaxing and it can help you |
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I think if you work hard every day, it will give you an advantage by other people. I think if you work hard every day, it will give you an advantage |
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Thanks for reading ! Thanks for reading |
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