April 8, 2025
Hi everyone today I want to tell about my hometown. I was born in Samarkand, Uzbekistan it is country on central asia. While I was born in Samarkand however I grew in Moscow, Russia. I consider Moscow is my hometown.
Moscow is the biggest city on europe by population, vibrant and multicultural hub . People from over all world live here including Ukraine, Belarus, Central Asian's and other more. One of Moscow's iconic landmarks is a "Seven Sisters" - a groupe ov seven striking Stalin's skyscrapers which was built in 1950s. However my favorite place is a red square. It's not just a square it's a historical fortress surrounded palace, cathedral and government buildings.
With population about 13,5 million people make Moscow is the second most populous city in europe after Istanbul. And also Moscow is safer than cities like New-York, London and Milan.
What about you? Your hometown same with sity where you was born?
Hi everyone t! Today I want to tell about my hometown.
I was born in Samarkand, Uzbekistan itwhich is country oin central aAsia.
You could also say "I was born in Samarkand, Uzbekistan, a country in central Asia.
While I was born in Samarkand; however, I grew up in Moscow, Russia.
Very small detail but if you're introducing a new idea in the middle of your sentence using "however" you usually put a semicolon before and a comma after "however"
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Moscow is the biggest city oin eEurope by population, as well as a vibrant and multicultural hub .
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People from over all world live here including Ukraineians, Belarusians, Central Asian's, and other mores.
One of Moscow's most iconic landmarks is athe "Seven Sisters" - a groupe ovf seven striking Stalin's skyscrapers which wasere built in the 1950s.
"were built" because there is more than one skyscraper
However, my favorite place is a rthe Red sSquare.
"the" because you are talking about a specific place.
It's not just a square, it's a historical fortress surrounded by a palace, a cathedral and government buildings.
With a population of about 13,5 million people make, Moscow is the second most populous city in eEurope after Istanbul.
Moscow is the subject of your sentence. Otherwise it makes it sound like the "people" have a population of 13,5 million :)
And also, Moscow is safer than cities like New-York, London andor Milan.
YIs your hometown the same wcith sity whery as the one you wasere born in?
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Very good! Small grammar mistakes but keep going! You'll progress easily by writing more! :)
Hi everyone t. Today, I want to tell you about my hometown.
I was born in Samarkand, Uzbekistan i. It is country oin cCentral aAsia.
While I was born in Samarkand, however I grew up in Moscow, Russia.
I consider Moscow is my hometown.
Moscow is the biggest city on eEurope by population,. It is a vibrant and multicultural hub .
People from over all world live here including those from Ukraine, Belarus, Central Asian's and other morecountries.
One of Moscow's iconic landmarks is athe "Seven Sisters" - a groupe ovf seven striking Stalin's skyscrapers which wasere built in the 1950s.
However, my favorite place is a rRed sSquare.
It's not just a square it's, but a historical fortress surrounded by a palace, cathedral and government buildings.
With a population of about 13,5 million people make, Moscow is the second most populous city in eEurope after Istanbul.
YIs your hometown the same wcith sityy as where you was're born in?
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Great work!
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Hi everyone today I want to tell about my hometown. Hi everyone Hi everyone |
I was born in Samarkand, Uzbekistan it is country on central asia. I was born in Samarkand, Uzbekistan I was born in Samarkand, Uzbekistan You could also say "I was born in Samarkand, Uzbekistan, a country in central Asia. |
While I was born in Samarkand however I grew in Moscow, Russia. While I was born in Samarkand, however I grew up in Moscow, Russia.
Very small detail but if you're introducing a new idea in the middle of your sentence using "however" you usually put a semicolon before and a comma after "however" |
I consider Moscow is my hometown. I consider Moscow I consider Moscow |
Moscow is the biggest city on europe by population, vibrant and multicultural hub . Moscow is the biggest city on Moscow is the biggest city Continents always capitalised |
People from over all world live here including Ukraine, Belarus, Central Asian's and other more. People from over all world live here including those from Ukraine, Belarus, Central Asia People from over all world live here including Ukrain |
One of Moscow's iconic landmarks is a "Seven Sisters" - a groupe ov seven striking Stalin's skyscrapers which was built in 1950s. One of Moscow's iconic landmarks is One of Moscow's most iconic landmarks is "were built" because there is more than one skyscraper |
However my favorite place is a red square. However, my favorite place is However, my favorite place is "the" because you are talking about a specific place. |
It's not just a square it's a historical fortress surrounded palace, cathedral and government buildings. It's not just a square It's not just a square, it's a historical fortress surrounded by a palace, a cathedral and government buildings. |
With population about 13,5 million people make Moscow is the second most populous city in europe after Istanbul. With a population of about 13,5 million people With a population of about 13,5 million Moscow is the subject of your sentence. Otherwise it makes it sound like the "people" have a population of 13,5 million :) |
And also Moscow is safer than cities like New-York, London and Milan. And also, Moscow is safer than cities like New-York, London |
What about you? |
Your hometown same with sity where you was born?
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