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May 30, 2021

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When I feel bothered to cook, I often go to grocery shops to get ready-to-eat meals. We call them "惣菜(SouZai)" or "おかず(Okazu)".
In Japan, we usually eat rice with some side dishes.
Many people are used to making rice so it isn't so hard to prepare rice for every meals.
However making side dishes sometimes become really bothering especially when we are tired.
And then, we often go to get some side dishes or go to a restaurant.
Getting some "惣菜" is often less expensive than eating dishes in a restaurant, so I prefer that.

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When I feel bothered todon't feel like cooking, I often go to grocery shoptores to get ready-to-eat meals.

We call them "惣菜" (SouZai)" or "おかず" (Okazu)".

In Japan, we usually eat rice with some side dishes.

Many people are used to making rice, so it isn't sothat hard to prepare rice for every meals.

However, making side dishes sometimes become really botheringsome, especially when weyou are tired.

Using "we" here sounds weird. To me, it sounds like either everyone is tired, or it sounds like you are referring to a specific group of people that are tired.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Generic_you

And then, we oftenIn this case, it's common to go to get some side dishes or to go to a restaurant.

"In this case" connects this sentence with the last sentence together, so it sounds nicer.

Getting some "惣菜" is often less expensive than eating dishes in a restaurant, so I prefer that.

Many people are used to making rice so it isn't so hard to prepare rice for every meals.

However making side dishes is sometimes become reallya bothering especially when we are tired.

When I feel bothered to cook, I often go to grocery shops to get ready-to-eat meals.


When I feel bothered todon't feel like cooking, I often go to grocery shoptores to get ready-to-eat meals.

We call them "惣菜(SouZai)" or "おかず(Okazu)".


We call them "惣菜" (SouZai)" or "おかず" (Okazu)".

In Japan, we usually eat rice with some side dishes.


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Many people are used to making rice so it isn't so hard to prepare rice for every meals.


Many people are used to making rice so it isn't so hard to prepare rice for every meals.

Many people are used to making rice, so it isn't sothat hard to prepare rice for every meals.

However making side dishes sometimes become really bothering especially when we are tired.


However making side dishes is sometimes become reallya bothering especially when we are tired.

However, making side dishes sometimes become really botheringsome, especially when weyou are tired.

Using "we" here sounds weird. To me, it sounds like either everyone is tired, or it sounds like you are referring to a specific group of people that are tired. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Generic_you

And then, we often go to get some side dishes or go to a restaurant.


And then, we oftenIn this case, it's common to go to get some side dishes or to go to a restaurant.

"In this case" connects this sentence with the last sentence together, so it sounds nicer.

Home Meal Replacement


Getting some "惣菜" is often less expensive than eating dishes in a restaurant, so I prefer that.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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