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ElmasCapito

April 20, 2025

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Holy week

Well, I have no news about my party, my life, or my main, so I'll just describe this Holy week in Mexico. Everyone goes to pools, and actions that re-activate our country's economy, as you know, Mexico's money it´s from tourism. I didn´t go to a pool, instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bones in front of my bedroom. Those are going to be places where people go to live and have to pay rent to my mother. Also, I installed a car immobilizer system in our old-fashioned automobile (tsuru), which we've recently bought, and I'm very excited to learn to drive. Yeah, I know my father should have learned me, but, surprise, he doesn't live with me. But don´t feel sorrow for me, at least 50% of Mexico's population has the same experience with their fathers. I overcame that. I just wonder how many my life would have changed if I would have had a man that I could say 'dad'. Would I became evil? (like Mark Grayson) Would I have been a better person? Who knows? Well, that's everything I can write at midnight, I'll write you later... See you

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Holy wWeek

Well, I have no news about my party, my life, or my main,activities so I'll just describe this Holy wWeek in Mexico.

Everyone goes to the pools, and actions that re-activateundertake in activities that will restart our country's economy, a. As you know, Mexico's money is from tourism.

I didn´t go to a pool, instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bones in front of mywalls of my front bedroom.

Those are going to be places where people go to live and have to pay rent to my motherMy mother will rent out this room in the future.

Also, II also installed a car immobilizer system in our old-fashioned automobile (tsuru), which we've recently bought, and I'm very excited to learn to drive. it.

Yeah, I know my father should have learnedtaught me, but, surpriseunfortunately, he doesn't live with me.

But don´t feel sorrowad for me, because at least 50% of Mexico's population has the same experience with their fathers.

I overcame that.

I just wonder how manyuch my life would have changed if I would have had a man that I could saycall 'dad'.

Would I have became evil?

(like Mark Grayson) Wor would I have becomen a better person?

Who knows?

Well, that's everything I can write at midnight,. I'll write to you later... See you

Holy wWeek

Well, I have no news about my party, my life, or my main(???), so I'll just describe this Holy wWeek in Mexico.

I don't know what "main" means here. ¿Tu pareja?

Everyone goes to pools, and actions that re-activate or does other things that help boost our country's economy, a. As you know, (most of) Mexico's money it´comes from tourism.

When you say "go to pools," do you mean swimming pools (albercas)? That's fine, just want to make sure I understand.

I didn´'t go to a pool,; instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bonunfinished structures in front of my bedroom.

I think this is what you meant, but I'm just guessing.

Those are going to be places where people go to live and have to pay rent to my mother.

Also, I installed a car immobilizer system in our old-fashioned automobile (tTsuru), which we've recently bought, and I'm very excited to learn to drive.

Yeah, I know my father should have learnedtaught me, but, surprise, he doesn't live with me.

But don´'t feel sorrowy for me,; at least 50% of Mexico's population has had the same experience with their fathers.

I've overcaome that.

A more natural and colloquial way to say this would also be: "I've gotten over that."

I just wonder how manyuch my life would have changed if I would have had a man that I could saycall 'dad'.

Would I have becaome evil?

(like Mark Grayson) Would I have been a better person?

Who knows?

Well, that's everythingall I can write at midnight,. I'll write to you later... See you.

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Very good. I had a little bit of trouble with the first couple of sentences though, but I hope the feedback helped. =)
If you're having trouble expressing yourself in the future, you can provide your own translation in Spanish to help correctors, or just put notes in (parentheses) if you're unsure of something.

Everyone goes to pools, and actions that re-activate our country's economy, as you know, Mexico's money it´comes from tourism.

I didn´t go to a pool, instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bones in front of my bedroom.

*First time I have heard "bare bones" in all my years of English. It's so hard to understand. (Does this sentence mean decorate the empty spaces in your room?)

Those are going to be places where people go to live and have to pay rent to my mother.

The sentence is very hard to understand. "Who is going to places?". You combined two sentences with no relation to each other. "someone goes to places" and then suddenly move to a topic "I have to rent to pay rent to my mother?"

Also, I installed a car immobilizer system in our old-fashioned automobile (tsuru), which we've recently bought, and I'm very excited to learn to drive.

Yeah, I know my father should have learnedtaught me, but, surprise, he doesn't live with me.

But don´t feel sorrowy for me, at least 50% of Mexico's population has the same experience with their fathers.

Would I becaome evil?

Everyone goes to pools, and actions that re-activate our country's economy, as you know, Mexico's money is from it's tourism.

I didn´t go to a pool, instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bones in front of my bedroom.

Those are going to be places where people go to live, and have to pay rent to my mother.

Yeah, I know my father should have learnedtaught me, but, surprise, he doesn't live with me.

But don´t feel sorrowy for me, at least 50% of Mexico's population has the same experience with their fathers.

I just wonder how many my life would have changed if I woulhad have had a man that I could say 'dad'.

Would I have becaome evil?

Feedback

Hi! Overall, this was a very well structured piece. Most of the errors were slight mistakes of conjugation - however, most of them were also made where the sentence had two possible structures and it felt like you blended them slightly. In the grand scheme of things this was still fantastic - great work! - L, Aus

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ElmasCapito

April 20, 2025

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Thank you!

Holy week


Holy wWeek

Holy wWeek

Well, I have no news about my party, my life, or my main, so I'll just describe this Holy week in Mexico.


Well, I have no news about my party, my life, or my main(???), so I'll just describe this Holy wWeek in Mexico.

I don't know what "main" means here. ¿Tu pareja?

Well, I have no news about my party, my life, or my main,activities so I'll just describe this Holy wWeek in Mexico.

Everyone goes to pools, and actions that re-activate our country's economy, as you know, Mexico's money it´s from tourism.


Everyone goes to pools, and actions that re-activate our country's economy, as you know, Mexico's money is from it's tourism.

Everyone goes to pools, and actions that re-activate our country's economy, as you know, Mexico's money it´comes from tourism.

Everyone goes to pools, and actions that re-activate or does other things that help boost our country's economy, a. As you know, (most of) Mexico's money it´comes from tourism.

When you say "go to pools," do you mean swimming pools (albercas)? That's fine, just want to make sure I understand.

Everyone goes to the pools, and actions that re-activateundertake in activities that will restart our country's economy, a. As you know, Mexico's money is from tourism.

I just wonder how many my life would have changed if I would have had a man that I could say 'dad'.


I just wonder how many my life would have changed if I woulhad have had a man that I could say 'dad'.

I just wonder how manyuch my life would have changed if I would have had a man that I could saycall 'dad'.

I just wonder how manyuch my life would have changed if I would have had a man that I could saycall 'dad'.

Would I became evil?


Would I have becaome evil?

Would I becaome evil?

Would I have becaome evil?

Would I have became evil?

(like Mark Grayson) Would I have been a better person?


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(like Mark Grayson) Wor would I have becomen a better person?

Who knows?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well, that's everything I can write at midnight, I'll write you later... See you


Well, that's everythingall I can write at midnight,. I'll write to you later... See you.

Well, that's everything I can write at midnight,. I'll write to you later... See you

Also, I installed a car immobilizer system in our old-fashioned automobile (tsuru), which we've recently bought, and I'm very excited to learn to drive.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, I installed a car immobilizer system in our old-fashioned automobile (tTsuru), which we've recently bought, and I'm very excited to learn to drive.

Also, II also installed a car immobilizer system in our old-fashioned automobile (tsuru), which we've recently bought, and I'm very excited to learn to drive. it.

Yeah, I know my father should have learned me, but, surprise, he doesn't live with me.


Yeah, I know my father should have learnedtaught me, but, surprise, he doesn't live with me.

Yeah, I know my father should have learnedtaught me, but, surprise, he doesn't live with me.

Yeah, I know my father should have learnedtaught me, but, surprise, he doesn't live with me.

Yeah, I know my father should have learnedtaught me, but, surpriseunfortunately, he doesn't live with me.

But don´t feel sorrow for me, at least 50% of Mexico's population has the same experience with their fathers.


But don´t feel sorrowy for me, at least 50% of Mexico's population has the same experience with their fathers.

But don´t feel sorrowy for me, at least 50% of Mexico's population has the same experience with their fathers.

But don´'t feel sorrowy for me,; at least 50% of Mexico's population has had the same experience with their fathers.

But don´t feel sorrowad for me, because at least 50% of Mexico's population has the same experience with their fathers.

I overcame that.


I've overcaome that.

A more natural and colloquial way to say this would also be: "I've gotten over that."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I didn´t go to a pool, instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bones in front of my bedroom.


I didn´t go to a pool, instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bones in front of my bedroom.

I didn´t go to a pool, instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bones in front of my bedroom.

*First time I have heard "bare bones" in all my years of English. It's so hard to understand. (Does this sentence mean decorate the empty spaces in your room?)

I didn´'t go to a pool,; instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bonunfinished structures in front of my bedroom.

I think this is what you meant, but I'm just guessing.

I didn´t go to a pool, instead I stayed in my home and painted the bare bones in front of mywalls of my front bedroom.

Those are going to be places where people go to live and have to pay rent to my mother.


Those are going to be places where people go to live, and have to pay rent to my mother.

Those are going to be places where people go to live and have to pay rent to my mother.

The sentence is very hard to understand. "Who is going to places?". You combined two sentences with no relation to each other. "someone goes to places" and then suddenly move to a topic "I have to rent to pay rent to my mother?"

Those are going to be places where people go to live and have to pay rent to my mother.

Those are going to be places where people go to live and have to pay rent to my motherMy mother will rent out this room in the future.

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