April 25, 2025
Hitting 尜（gá）
This game involves two parts which are both made of wood.
The long one is a wooden stick with a size of 45 centimeters in length and 3.5 centimeters in diameter.
The short one is also a wooden stick, with a size of 3 - 3.5 centimeters in diameter and 15 centimeters in length, and both sides of the short one are shaped.
When children play the game, they hold the long stick and use the other end of it to hit either end of the short one to make it jump into the air, and then choose the best moment to hit the middle of the short one far away.
Whoever hits the gá farthest is the winner.
Well, that is all for this journal. I will introduce you to another game in the next one.
This game involves two parts which are both made of wood. One of the sticks is long and the other is short.
The long one is a wooden stick with a size of 45 centimeters in length and 3.5 centimeters in diameter.
Seems correct.
But you need to clearly say "one is short and one is long", which I put in the preceding sentence.
The short one is also a wooden stick, with a size of 3 - 3.5 centimeters in diameter and 15 centimeters in length, and both sides of the short one are shapedhewn.
"Shaped" might be okay since what you are trying to say the stick has been formed into something.
I can't of a one word substitute for "shaped" so I used "hewn".
[ To hew - make or shape (something) by cutting or chopping a material such as wood or stone. ]
When children play the game, they hold the long stick and use the other end of it to hit either end of the short one to make it jump into the air, and then choose the best moment to hit the middle of the short one far away.
"either end" is correct.
Whoever hits the gá farthest is the winner.
Well, that is all for this journal.
I will introduce you to another game in the next one.
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Best of luck!
April 25, 2025
Perfect and seems complete to me. I don't want to correct more because it is already okay as it is and fine in my experience. Thank you.
April 25, 2025
* with a few minor mistakes
April 25, 2025
We have a game similar to this it is called "syato"
April 25, 2025
Both ends of the short stick were sharpened. Thank you very much.
Hitting 尜（gá）
This game involves two parts which are both made of wood.
The long oOne is a long wooden stick with a size of 45 centimeters in length and 3.5 centimeters in diameter.
You can cut out some of the text here.
The shortother one is also a wooden stick, with a size of 3 - 3.5 centimeters in diameter and 15 centimeters in length, and; both sides of the short oneof its sides are shaped.
When children play the game, they hold the long stick and use the other end of it to hit either end of the short onestick in order to make it jump into the air, and then choose the best moment to hit the middle of the short one far awayit as far away as possible.
Rewritten this a bit to make it clearer.
Whoever hits the gá farthest is the winner.
Well, that is all for this journal.
I will introduce you to another game in the next one.
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Good work. Quite interesting to learn about this.
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This game involves two parts which are both made of wood. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This game involves two parts which are both made of wood. One of the sticks is long and the other is short. |
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The long one is a wooden stick with a size of 45 centimeters in length and 3.5 centimeters in diameter.
You can cut out some of the text here. The long one is a wooden stick with a size of 45 centimeters in length and 3.5 centimeters in diameter. Seems correct. But you need to clearly say "one is short and one is long", which I put in the preceding sentence. |
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Whoever hits the gá farthest is the winner. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The short one is also a wooden stick, with a size of 3 - 3.5 centimeters in diameter and 15 centimeters in length, and both sides of the short one are shaped. The The short one is also a wooden stick, with a size of 3 - 3.5 centimeters in diameter and 15 centimeters in length, and both sides of the short one are "Shaped" might be okay since what you are trying to say the stick has been formed into something. I can't of a one word substitute for "shaped" so I used "hewn". [ To hew - make or shape (something) by cutting or chopping a material such as wood or stone. ] |
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When children play the game, they hold the long stick and use the other end of it to hit either end of the short one to make it jump into the air, and then choose the best moment to hit the middle of the short one far away. When children play the game, they hold the long stick and use the other end of it to hit either end of the short Rewritten this a bit to make it clearer. When children play the game, they hold the long stick and use the other end of it to hit either end of the short one to make it jump into the air, and then choose the best moment to hit the middle of the short one far away. "either end" is correct. |
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Well, that is all for this journal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will introduce you to another game in the next one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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