May 20, 2021
Hi:) would you please check my writing?
People have different views about that making money in the business activity make social responsibilities for them. I personally agree with this trend.
Todays business companies have grown in the whole world. Despite of this growing, their social responsibilities have grown up too. Firstly, these companies have to hire many people as worker so transportation increase.
These companies must provide public vehicle for their workers to illustrate if any workers use their car. The traffic will increase.
The other view is that business companies have an important role in making jobs for the country. Businesses have to make a different position job and hire unemployment people for this occupation. If number of unemployment people decline in the country, the living quality will increase.
To conclusion, the following evident we can see above, I personally believe that any businesses have to do their role about their social responsibilities for having a calm life together.
Hi:) would you please check my writing?
People have different views about that making money in the business activity make social responsibilities for theme social responsibilities associated with earning money from business activity.
I personally agree with this trend.
Unclear what "this trend" means - you agree that people who earn money through business have responsibilities?
Today's business companies have grown in the wholthroughout the world.
Despite of this growingAt the same time, their social responsibilities have grown upexpanded, too.
"To grow up" = to grow and become an adult, so it's only used to describe kids.
Firstly, these companies have to hire many people as worker sos, which requires more forms of transportation increase.
These companies must provide public vehicle for their workers to illustrate if any workers use their carvehicles/modes of transportation for their workers.
If a vehicle is provided by a company, it's not public. Public = government-owned/provided
The traffic will increase.
The other view is that business companies have an important role in makcreating jobs for the country.
Businesses have to make a different position jobs and hire unemploymented people for this occupationem.
If number ofthe country's unemployment peoplrate decline in the country, the living qualitys, quality of life will increase.
ToIn conclusion, the following evident we can see above, I personallyI believe that any businesses have to do their role about theirmust attend to social responsibilities for having a calm life togetherthe betterment of society.
Sept. 24, 2021
thank you so much
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Hi:) would you please check my writing? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People have different views about that making money in the business activity make social responsibilities for them. People have different views about th |
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I personally agree with this trend. I personally agree with this trend. Unclear what "this trend" means - you agree that people who earn money through business have responsibilities? |
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Todays business companies have grown in the whole world. Today's business companies have grown |
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Despite of this growing, their social responsibilities have grown up too.
"To grow up" = to grow and become an adult, so it's only used to describe kids. |
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Firstly, these companies have to hire many people as worker so transportation increase. Firstly, these companies have to hire many people as worker |
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These companies must provide public vehicle for their workers to illustrate if any workers use their car. These companies must provide If a vehicle is provided by a company, it's not public. Public = government-owned/provided |
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The traffic will increase. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The other view is that business companies have an important role in making jobs for the country. The other view is that business companies have an important role in |
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Businesses have to make a different position job and hire unemployment people for this occupation. Businesses have to make |
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If number of unemployment people decline in the country, the living quality will increase. If |
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To conclusion, the following evident we can see above, I personally believe that any businesses have to do their role about their social responsibilities for having a calm life together.
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