May 20, 2021
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The graph illustrates the amount of the workforce that are employed.
Workforce of the parts finance, technology and retail had an increase trend while for finance workforce had been seen a reduce trend.
In 1980 to 1990 the workforce employed in parts of finance, technology and retail had a gradually increase; in 1990 to 2000, technology and retail parts experienced a slowly incline from approximately 6% to about 6.5%, and the part of finance had sharply raised from about 7% to 14 %. In 2000 to 2010 the part of retail had constantly trend in 5%, the part of technology saw moderately increase from 6% to 10% and finance had a slowly incline from 14% to 15%.
Hello everyone! I'd appreciate it if someone were to correct me.
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May 21, 2021
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Hello everyone! I'd appreciate it if someone correct me Hello everyone! I'd appreciate it if someone were to correct me. |
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The graph illustrates the amount of the workforce that are employed. The graph illustrates the amount of the workforce that |
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Workforce of the parts finance, technology and retail had an increase trend while for finance workforce had been seen a reduce trend.
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In 1980 to 1990 the workforce employed in parts of finance, technology and retail had a gradually increase; in 1990 to 2000, technology and retail parts experienced a slowly incline from approximately 6% to about 6.5%, and the part of finance had sharply raised from about 7% to 14 %.
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In 2000 to 2010 the part of retail had constantly trend in 5%, the part of technology saw moderately increase from 6% to 10% and finance had a slowly incline from 14% to 15%. In 2000 to 2010, the |
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