June 17, 2025
Today is my first time to log in this website. It took me a while to register my account because the name is so hard to come up.I've tried so many times but all of the names had been used.Finally I had to use this silly name. Actually my name is Han, and now , I'm still named Han in this website,just more happy .You see,I'm laughing so happily in my name.I hope I can improve my English by writting diary here,and I'd like to help others who want to learn Chinese,this is really a wonderfull platform for learning language, wish I can make interesting friends here.
今天是我第一次登陆这个网站,我花了一会时间注册账号,因为起名字太难了。我试了好多次但是名字都被占用。最后我只能用这个傻气的名字。实际上我的名字叫Han,现在我在这个网站的名字也是Han,就是比以前更开心了,因为我的名字里有好多“哈哈哈哈哈”,我希望我能通过在这写日记的方式提高英语,也想帮助其他想学中文的人。这个网站真是一个非常好的语言学习平台,希望我能在这交到有意思的朋友。
Today is my first time to log inlogging in to this website.
It took me a while to register my account because ithe name is so hard to come up. with a name. I've tried so many times but all of the names had been used. Finally I had to use this silly name.
Spaces after full stops are needed. Both for English grammar, but also for this site's feedback form to give comments on each sentence.
Actually my name is Han, and now , I'm still named Han in this website, just more happy . You see, I'm laughing so I put "happily" in my name. I hope I can improve my English by writting a diary here, and I'd like to help others who want to learn Chinese,t. This is really a wonderfull platform for learning languages, wishI hope I can make interesting friends here.
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Today is my first time to log ion this website.
It took me a while to register my account because the name is so hard to come up.I had to find a name and that was difficult. I've tried so many times but all of the names had been used.already been taken. Finally I had to use this silly name.
Actually my name is Han, and now , I'm still continue to be named Han ion this website,just more and I am happy . You see, I'm laughing so happily inwith my name. I hope I can improve my English by writting in this diary here,and I'd like to help others who want to learn Chinese,t. This is really a wonderfull platform for learning a language, wish. I hope I can make some interesting friends here.
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Today is my first time to lologging into this website.
It took me a while to register my account because the username iwas so hard to come up. with. I've tried so many times, but all of the names had already been used. Finally, I had to use this silly name.
For accounts, the name tends to be called a username
Actually, my name is Han, a. And now , I'm still named Han ion this website, just more happy . You see, I'm laughing so happily in my name. I hope I can improve my English by writting/keeping a diary here, and I'd like to help others who want to learn Chinese,t. This is really a wonderfull platform for learning language, wishs. I hope I can make some interesting friends here.
Generally, when speaking about the future we say, "I hope I can..." but when speaking about the past we tend to say "I wish I could have..." for using hope vs wish. When journaling regularly, we generally say "keep" a diary/journal.
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For commas and periods, they go immediately following a word (no space before) and then a space immediately afterwards, before the next word.
Today is my first time to log using this website.
You could also say "Today is my first time logging into this website", but I think "using" would be the more natural word to use here.
It took me a while to register my account, because the name iit was so hard to come up.I've with a name. I tried so many times, but all of the names had been used. Finally, I had to use this silly name.
Actually, my name is Han, and now , I'm still named Han ion this website,. It just makes me more happy . You see, I'm laughing so happily in my name. I hope I can improve my English by writting in my diary here, and I'd like to help others who want to learn Chinese,t. This is really a wonderfull platform for learning language, wishs. I hope I can make interesting friends here.
"I wish" is ok, but I think it's more natural to say "I hope"
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