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TOMO_o

Jan. 1, 2026

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Have you ever had an operation?

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for nose, four for lungs. I’ve had a sick of lungs named Pneunothorax, which form a hole on my lungs, and it was very painful. So even now, I try to avoid something that press my lungs like a scuba diving.

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I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for my nose, four for my lungs.

I’ve had a sick of lungslung disease named Pneunothorax, which formed a hole on my lungs, and it was very painful.

So even now, I try to avoid someanything that pstresses my lungs like a scuba diving.

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I've had two operations in my life. One was when I was a small child and went fine, the other was in my 20s and had some complications and didn't even achieve what it was supposed to :(

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TOMO_o

Jan. 1, 2026

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Thank you for your very thorough correction.
I tried to write a simple sentence, but there are still some mistakes here and there.
Health is the most important thing.

Have you ever had an operation?

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for my nose, four for my lungs.

I’ve had a sick of lungs namlung condition called Pneunmothorax, which formcaused a hole oin my lungs, and it was very painful.

So even now, I try to avoid something that pressapplies pressure on my lungs, like a scuba diving.

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I actually also have Pneumothorax when I was young and had an operation too. Though it only occurred once, thankfully.

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TOMO_o

Jan. 1, 2026

124

Thank you for your very thorough correction.
I tried to write a simple sentence, but there are still some mistakes here and there.
Health is the most important thing.

Have you ever had an operation?

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, - two for my nose, and four for my lungs.

I’ve had a sick of lungs named Plung disease called a pneunmothorax, which form a hole oere a hole formed in my lungs, and it was very painful.

OR: "I've previously had a pneumothorax, where a hole formed in my lung and caused it to collapse. It was very painful."

Your sentence is a bit long, so it would flow better to break it into 2 seperate sentences.

So even now, I try to avoid someanything that would press on my lungs, like a scuba diving.

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Great work!

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TOMO_o

Jan. 1, 2026

124

Thank you for your very thorough correction.
I tried to write a simple sentence, but there are still some mistakes here and there.
Health is the most important thing.

Have you ever had an operation?


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I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for nose, four for lungs.


I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, - two for my nose, and four for my lungs.

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for my nose, four for my lungs.

I’ve ever had a lot of operations in my life, two for my nose, four for my lungs.

I’ve had a sick of lungs named Pneunothorax, which form a hole on my lungs, and it was very painful.


I’ve had a sick of lungs named Plung disease called a pneunmothorax, which form a hole oere a hole formed in my lungs, and it was very painful.

OR: "I've previously had a pneumothorax, where a hole formed in my lung and caused it to collapse. It was very painful." Your sentence is a bit long, so it would flow better to break it into 2 seperate sentences.

I’ve had a sick of lungs namlung condition called Pneunmothorax, which formcaused a hole oin my lungs, and it was very painful.

I’ve had a sick of lungslung disease named Pneunothorax, which formed a hole on my lungs, and it was very painful.

So even now, I try to avoid something that press my lungs like a scuba diving.


So even now, I try to avoid someanything that would press on my lungs, like a scuba diving.

So even now, I try to avoid something that pressapplies pressure on my lungs, like a scuba diving.

So even now, I try to avoid someanything that pstresses my lungs like a scuba diving.

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