Sept. 14, 2025
I remember being stung by a paper wasp lately when I walked around the street near my house. It was very hurts and skin color has changed to reddish-black. It's just curious, do all bee have own honey? If so I'd like to taste them.
I remember being stung by a paper wasp laterecently when I walked arounds walking on the street near my house.
“lately” → “recently”
Mistake: “lately” means “in the past weeks/months in general,” not one specific event.
Fix: Use “recently” for a specific incident.
“when I walked around the street” → “when I was walking on the street”
Mistake: Past simple (“walked”) makes it sound like two unrelated actions, but here the wasp sting happened during the action of walking.
Fix: Use past continuous (“was walking”) to show one event happened while another was in progress.
Also, we normally say “on the street” (not “around the street”).
It was very hurtspainful and the skin color has changed toturned reddish-black.
Mistake: “Hurts” is a verb, not an adjective.
Fix: The correct adjective is “painful.” Alternatively: “It hurt a lot.”
Mistake: “has changed” is present perfect, but the event is in the past. Also, English usually uses “the skin turned” or “my skin turned.”
Fix: Use past simple with a clearer subject: “the skin turned reddish-black.”
It's'm just curious, do all bee haves make their own honey?
“It’s just curious” → “I’m just curious”
Mistake: “It’s” doesn’t make sense here; curiosity belongs to the speaker.
Fix: Use “I’m just curious.”
Mistakes:
“bee” should be plural → “bees.”
We don’t say “have honey” (that would mean they already possess it). The natural verb is “make honey.”
Need possessive pronoun → “their own honey.”
If so I'd like to taste ithem.
“taste it”
Mistake: “Honey” is uncountable, so we use singular “it,” not plural “them.”
Fix: “taste it.”
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Great work. I hope the sting did not hurt too much!
Have you ever been stung by a bee? |
I remember being stung by a paper wasp lately when I walked around the street near my house. I remember being stung by a paper wasp “lately” → “recently” Mistake: “lately” means “in the past weeks/months in general,” not one specific event. Fix: Use “recently” for a specific incident. “when I walked around the street” → “when I was walking on the street” Mistake: Past simple (“walked”) makes it sound like two unrelated actions, but here the wasp sting happened during the action of walking. Fix: Use past continuous (“was walking”) to show one event happened while another was in progress. Also, we normally say “on the street” (not “around the street”). |
It was very hurts and skin color has changed to reddish-black. It was very Mistake: “Hurts” is a verb, not an adjective. Fix: The correct adjective is “painful.” Alternatively: “It hurt a lot.” Mistake: “has changed” is present perfect, but the event is in the past. Also, English usually uses “the skin turned” or “my skin turned.” Fix: Use past simple with a clearer subject: “the skin turned reddish-black.” |
It's just curious, do all bee have own honey? I “It’s just curious” → “I’m just curious” Mistake: “It’s” doesn’t make sense here; curiosity belongs to the speaker. Fix: Use “I’m just curious.” Mistakes: “bee” should be plural → “bees.” We don’t say “have honey” (that would mean they already possess it). The natural verb is “make honey.” Need possessive pronoun → “their own honey.” |
If so I'd like to taste them. If so I'd like to taste it “taste it” Mistake: “Honey” is uncountable, so we use singular “it,” not plural “them.” Fix: “taste it.” |
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