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Happy memories. Part 2

I remember how I spend all day in a PC club playing in PvP games through local networks, It was brother’s of mine Birthday. Most strange part of it is admins didn’t notice that our payed time was up and we played until it was deep into the evening.

I had moment in life when I was throwing paper airplanes in montains of Dagestan with my cousins. The paper airplanes flew well because of the headwind. We walked down the hill, picked up our paper planes, climbed back up, and threw them again.

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Happy mMemories. Part 2

I remember how I spendt all day in a PC clubn Internet Cafe playing in PvP games through the local networks,. It was my brother’'s of mine Bbirthday.

"Internet Cafe" is used to refer to a LAN gaming shop, even if they don't serve food.

MThe most strange part of it iswas that the admins didn’t notice that our payed time was up, and we played until it was deep into the evening.

I had a nice moment in my life when I was throwing paper airplanes in the montains of Dagestan with my cousins.

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Happy mMemories., Part 2

I remember howone time when I spendt all day in a PC club playing in PvP games through local networks,. It was my brother’s of mine Bbirthday.

MostIt was strange part of it isthat the admins didn’t notice that our payed time was up and we played until it was deeplate into the evening.

I had a moment in life when I was throwing paper airplanes in the mountains of Dagestan with my cousins.

The paper airplanes flew well because of the headwind.

We walked down the hill, picked up our paper planes, climbed back up, and threw them again.

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Those do sound like lovely memories. Thank you for sharing them <3

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I remember how I spendt all day in a PC club playing in PvP games throughon local networks,. It was my brother’'s of mine Bbirthday.

MostThe strangest part of it iswas that the admins didn’t notice that our payed time was up and we played until it was deep into the evening.

I had moment in life when I wasremember throwing paper airplanes in the mountains of Dagestan with my cousins.

"I had a moment in life" sounds like it was a phase, I'm assuming this is just a one off memory.

Happy memories. Part 2

Happy mMemories., Part 2

Happy mMemories. Part 2

I remember how I spend all day in a PC club playing in PvP games through local networks, It was brother’s of mine Birthday.

I remember how I spendt all day in a PC club playing in PvP games throughon local networks,. It was my brother’'s of mine Bbirthday.

I remember howone time when I spendt all day in a PC club playing in PvP games through local networks,. It was my brother’s of mine Bbirthday.

I remember how I spendt all day in a PC clubn Internet Cafe playing in PvP games through the local networks,. It was my brother’'s of mine Bbirthday.

"Internet Cafe" is used to refer to a LAN gaming shop, even if they don't serve food.

Most strange part of it is admins didn’t notice that our payed time was up and we played until it was deep into the evening.

MostThe strangest part of it iswas that the admins didn’t notice that our payed time was up and we played until it was deep into the evening.

MostIt was strange part of it isthat the admins didn’t notice that our payed time was up and we played until it was deeplate into the evening.

MThe most strange part of it iswas that the admins didn’t notice that our payed time was up, and we played until it was deep into the evening.

I had moment in life when I was throwing paper airplanes in montains of Dagestan with my cousins.

I had moment in life when I wasremember throwing paper airplanes in the mountains of Dagestan with my cousins.

"I had a moment in life" sounds like it was a phase, I'm assuming this is just a one off memory.

I had a moment in life when I was throwing paper airplanes in the mountains of Dagestan with my cousins.

I had a nice moment in my life when I was throwing paper airplanes in the montains of Dagestan with my cousins.

The paper airplanes flew well because of the headwind.

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We walked down the hill, picked up our paper planes, climbed back up, and threw them again.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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