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HelenSnow

Sept. 29, 2025

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Happiness: Small Observations

I enjoy observing. Everything in the world exists simultaneously. There are so many stories around us; you need just to notice them.

A building that you usually pass by has its own history. Pay attention to its style, and that will tell you about the period when it was built.

License plates can tell you who are not local citizens. Why do you think they are here? Perhaps their relatives live here, who knows.

I like to observe people in public spaces. Look, they're walking with children, others are playing tennis... When I'm going through a crowd, I overhear fragments of people's conversations and I see stories.

I like to know that church bells ring at 6 p.m. At that time even if I'm not close enough to hear, I still know that they are ringing. Everything in the world exists at the same time. You and I, who correct others' posts and publish their own, are in different countries, but we have something in common. At least, that we are.

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Happiness: Small Observations

I enjoy observing.

Everything in the world exists simultaneously.

There are so many stories around us; you need just to notice them.

A building that you usually pass by has its own history.

Pay attention to its style, and that will tell you about the period. This gives clues as to when it was built.

I'm not sure why your sentence sounded unnatural to my native ears. It was technically correct. It sounds much more natural this way.

License plates can tell youindicate those who are not local citizens.

Again, it was technically correct. This just sounds more natural to me.

Why do you think they are here?

Perhaps their relatives live here, who knows.

I like to observe people in public spaces.

Look, t! They're walking with children, others are playing tennis...

When I'm going through a crowd, I overhear fragments of people's conversations and I see stories.

I like to know that church bells ring at 6 p.m. At that time even if I'm not close enough to hear, I still know that they are ringing.

Everything in the world exists at the same time.

You and I, who correct each others' posts and publish theiour own, are in different countries, but we have something in common.

At least, that we are.

This sentence is really weird without context.

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Hey! Great job! These sentences are great! Keep up the hard work!

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HelenSnow

Sept. 30, 2025

26

Hi! Thank you😊

Happiness: Small Observations

I enjoy observing.

Everything in the world exists simultaneously.

There are so many stories around us; you need justjust need to notice them.

A building that you usually pass by has its own history.

Pay attention to its style, and that will tell you about the period from when it was built.

License plates can tell you who are not local citizens.

Why do you think they are here?

Perhaps their relatives live here, who knows.

I like to observe people in public spaces.

Look, they're walking with children, others are playing tennis...

When I'm going through a crowd, I overhear fragments of people's conversations and I see stories.

I like to know that church bells ring at 6 p.m. At that time even if I'm not close enough to hear, I still know that they are ringing.

Everything in the world exists at the same time.

You and I, who correct others' posts and publish their own, are in different countries, but we have something in common.

At least, that we are.

Feedback

Love this!

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HelenSnow

Sept. 30, 2025

26

Thank you😊

Happiness: Small Observations


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I enjoy observing.


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Everything in the world exists simultaneously.


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There are so many stories around us; you need just to notice them.


There are so many stories around us; you need justjust need to notice them.

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A building that you usually pass by has its own history.


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Pay attention to its style, and that will tell you about the period when it was built.


Pay attention to its style, and that will tell you about the period from when it was built.

Pay attention to its style, and that will tell you about the period. This gives clues as to when it was built.

I'm not sure why your sentence sounded unnatural to my native ears. It was technically correct. It sounds much more natural this way.

License plates can tell you who are not local citizens.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

License plates can tell youindicate those who are not local citizens.

Again, it was technically correct. This just sounds more natural to me.

Why do you think they are here?


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Perhaps their relatives live here, who knows.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like to observe people in public spaces.


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Look, they're walking with children, others are playing tennis...


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Look, t! They're walking with children, others are playing tennis...

When I'm going through a crowd, I overhear fragments of people's conversations and I see stories.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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I like to know that church bells ring at 6 p.m. At that time even if I'm not close enough to hear, I still know that they are ringing.


I like to know that church bells ring at 6 p.m. At that time even if I'm not close enough to hear, I still know that they are ringing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Everything in the world exists at the same time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You and I, who correct others' posts and publish their own, are in different countries, but we have something in common.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You and I, who correct each others' posts and publish theiour own, are in different countries, but we have something in common.

At least, that we are.


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At least, that we are.

This sentence is really weird without context.

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