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Happiness

Enjoyment of life doesnt come from others but others can influence you to enjoy your life . Only happiness comes from inner you can saw as its enjoyable anything you want .
But its same think as fooling yourself no one have to be smart or essential for others so u can enjoy your life ever you want but not forget that its pointless


Амьдралаас таашаал авах нь бусдаас ирдэггүй, харин бусад хүмүүс таныг амьдралаасаа таашаал авахад нөлөөлж чадна. Зөвхөн аз жаргал л дотроос ирдэг, та хүссэн зүйлээ тааламжтай гэж харж чадна. Гэхдээ энэ нь өөрийгөө хуурахтай адил юм. Хэн ч ухаалаг эсвэл бусдын төлөө чухал байх албагүй, ингэснээр та хүссэн үедээ амьдралаасаа таашаал авах боломжтой, гэхдээ энэ нь утгагүй гэдгийг бүү мартаарай.

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Happiness

Enjoyment of life doesnt’t come from others but others can influence how you to enjoy your life .

Only hHappiness comes from inner you can saw as its enjoyable anythingonly from within and you can enjoy it as much as you want .

But its same think as fooling yourself no one have to be smart or essential for others so u can enjoy your life ever you want but not forget that its pointless

Sorry I didn’t quite understand what you wanted to say here

EThe enjoyment of life doesn't come from others, but others can influence how you to enjoy your life .

Because we are speaking conceptually, I would say "the enjoyment..."

Only hHappiness only comes from inner you can saw as itsside yourself. You can find it by enjoyableing anything you want .

I didn't understand the last part, so I made an edit based on my best guess.

But its's the same think asg, fooling yourself n. No one haves to be smart or essential for others, so you can enjoy your life however you want but no. But don't forget that it's pointless.

This was also difficult to understand, so I'm not sure if I edited according to your intention

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EThe enjoyment of life doesn't come from others, but others can influence you tor enjoy yourment of life .

Rephrased to emphasize the "echo" in your sentence.

Only hHappiness can only comes from inner you can saw as its enjoyable[peace?]. You can find enjoyment out of anything you want .

You had apparently omitted a word in the original; "peace" was my best guess based on what people usually say in this context, but you might have something else in mind.

But its's the same thinkg as fooling yourself n. No one haveneeds to be smart or essential for others so . You can enjoy your life everany way you want, but nodon't forget that it's pointless[?]

I am not sure if you really intended the word "pointless" in the last sentence, but that is what would be considered nihilistic philosophy.

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Enjoyment of life doesnt come from others but others can influence you to enjoy your life .


EThe enjoyment of life doesn't come from others, but others can influence you tor enjoy yourment of life .

Rephrased to emphasize the "echo" in your sentence.

EThe enjoyment of life doesn't come from others, but others can influence how you to enjoy your life .

Because we are speaking conceptually, I would say "the enjoyment..."

Enjoyment of life doesnt’t come from others but others can influence how you to enjoy your life .

Only happiness comes from inner you can saw as its enjoyable anything you want .


Only hHappiness can only comes from inner you can saw as its enjoyable[peace?]. You can find enjoyment out of anything you want .

You had apparently omitted a word in the original; "peace" was my best guess based on what people usually say in this context, but you might have something else in mind.

Only hHappiness only comes from inner you can saw as itsside yourself. You can find it by enjoyableing anything you want .

I didn't understand the last part, so I made an edit based on my best guess.

Only hHappiness comes from inner you can saw as its enjoyable anythingonly from within and you can enjoy it as much as you want .

But its same think as fooling yourself no one have to be smart or essential for others so u can enjoy your life ever you want but not forget that its pointless


But its's the same thinkg as fooling yourself n. No one haveneeds to be smart or essential for others so . You can enjoy your life everany way you want, but nodon't forget that it's pointless[?]

I am not sure if you really intended the word "pointless" in the last sentence, but that is what would be considered nihilistic philosophy.

But its's the same think asg, fooling yourself n. No one haves to be smart or essential for others, so you can enjoy your life however you want but no. But don't forget that it's pointless.

This was also difficult to understand, so I'm not sure if I edited according to your intention

But its same think as fooling yourself no one have to be smart or essential for others so u can enjoy your life ever you want but not forget that its pointless

Sorry I didn’t quite understand what you wanted to say here

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