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SummerTeaWater

May 17, 2021

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Hamster Story for My Son

My son really likes hamsters because they are so cute.

When I tell a story, I usually turn a main charactor into a hamster.

For example, there is a story about three little hamsters instread of three little pigs.

Sometimes, we sing songs where charactors in the lyrics turn into hamsters.

"Five little hamster went out one day
Over the hill and far away
Mother hamster said, Squeak, Squeak, Squeak,
But only four little hamsters came back."

My son is very interesting that kind of songs and stories

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When I tell a story, I usually turn a main charactor into a hamster.

charactor -> character

For example, there is a story about three little hamsters instread of three little pigs.

For example, I told a story about three little hamsters instead of three little pigs.

"Five little hamster went out one day

Five little hamsters went out one day.

Mother hamster said, Squeak, Squeak, Squeak,

The mother hamster said, "squeak, squeak, squeak."

My son is very interesting that kind of songs and stories

My son is very interested in that kind of song or story.

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SummerTeaWater

May 18, 2021

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Thank you very much!

Hamster Story for My Son

My son really likes hamsters because they are so cute.

When I tell a story, I usually turn a main charactor into a hamster.

For example, there is a story about three little hamsters instread of three little pigs.

Sometimes, we sing songs where charactoers in the lyrics turn into hamsters.

"Five little hamster went out one day

Over the hill and far away

Mother hamster said, Squeak, Squeak, Squeak,

But only four little hamsters came back.

"

My son is very interesting thatin those kinds of songs and stories

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Your son is correct, hamsters make everything better.

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SummerTeaWater

May 18, 2021

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That's right. Hamsters are so cute.
Thank you for your correction :)

Hamster Story for My Son


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My son really likes hamsters because they are so cute.


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When I tell a story, I usually turn a main charactor into a hamster.


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When I tell a story, I usually turn a main charactor into a hamster.

charactor -> character

For example, there is a story about three little hamsters instread of three little pigs.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For example, there is a story about three little hamsters instread of three little pigs.

For example, I told a story about three little hamsters instead of three little pigs.

Sometimes, we sing songs where charactors in the lyrics turn into hamsters.


Sometimes, we sing songs where charactoers in the lyrics turn into hamsters.

"Five little hamster went out one day


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"Five little hamster went out one day

Five little hamsters went out one day.

Over the hill and far away


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Mother hamster said, Squeak, Squeak, Squeak,


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Mother hamster said, Squeak, Squeak, Squeak,

The mother hamster said, "squeak, squeak, squeak."

But only four little hamsters came back.


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"


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My son is very interesting that kind of songs and stories


My son is very interesting thatin those kinds of songs and stories

My son is very interesting that kind of songs and stories

My son is very interested in that kind of song or story.

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