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My final exam.

Today I finished my English course ,I obtained a diploma but I'm seriously considering a personal tutor, I felt disappointed because I obtained 5/10 in one exam I know it's expensive but I need to increase my English level B1 to B2 to increase my opportunities to find a better job or for my own business.


Hoy termine my curso de inglés, yo obtuve un diploma pero estoy considerando seriamente un tutor personal me siento deprimido porque obtuve 5 de 10 en un examen yo sé que es caro pero necesito incrementar mi nivel de inglés nivel B1 a B2 para incrementar mis oportunidades de encontrar un mejor trabajo o para mí propio negocio.

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Jos03

today

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Jos03

today

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My final exam.


My fFinal eExam. My Final Exam

Today I finished my English course ,I obtained a diploma but I'm seriously considering a personal tutor, I felt disappointed because I obtained 5/10 in one exam


Today I finished my English course. ,I obtained a diploma but I'm seriously considering a personal tutor,. I felt disappointed because I obtainedgot 5/10 ion onean exam. Today I finished my English course. I obtained a diploma but I'm seriously considering a personal tutor. I felt disappointed because I got 5/10 on an exam.

I think separating these into separate sentences sounds more natural. Also I think "got" fits better than "obtained" here.

Today, I finished my English course. ,I obtained a diploma, but I'm seriously considering a personal tutor, because I feelt disappointed becausethat I obtained only 5/10 in one exam. Today, I finished my English course. I obtained a diploma, but I'm seriously considering a personal tutor, because I feel disappointed that I obtained only 5/10 in one exam.

I know it's expensive but I need to increase my English level B1 to B2 to increase my opportunities to find a better job or for my own business.


I know it's expensive, but I need to increase my English level from B1 to B2 to increase my opportunitichances ato finding a better job or for my own business. I know it's expensive, but I need to increase my English level from B1 to B2 to increase my chances at finding a better job or for my own business.

I know it's expensive, but I need to increasmprove my English level from B1 to B2 to increase my opportunitichances tof finding a better job or for my own business. I know it's expensive, but I need to improve my English level from B1 to B2 to increase my chances of finding a better job or for my own business.

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