April 2, 2021
Graduation from university
I graduated from university last week. I had enjoyed for four years, and learned a lot of things. There are a lot of opportunity to communicate with many people. While I talked with many people, I was able to brush up on my communication skills. Now, I can naturally talk with people whom I meet at first time. I made a lot of friends there. University is not only studying, but also nurture important things. However my friends is working in a scattered state in Japan. I'm going to study in the United States, but I will be able to go there three month later because of COVID-19. I am irritating because my friends are taking the new first step, but I only wait to go there.
I want to go studying as soon as possible.
Graduation from university
I graduated from university last week.
I had enjoyed it for four years, and learned a lot ofmany things.
There awere a lot ofmany opportunityies to communicate with manyvarious kinds of people.
While I talked with many people, I was able to brush up on my communications skills because I was able to talk to so many people.
Now, I can naturally talk with people whomen I meet athem for the first time.
University is not only about studying, but also about nurtureing important things.
However my friends is working in a scattered state in Japan.
Not sure what you want to say here. Did you mean that your friends are scattered all over Japan working in different places?
I'm going to study in the United States, but I will be able to go there three month later because of COVID-19. However, because of COVID-19 I will go in three months.
I am irritatinged because my friends are now taking the newir first steps, but I onlywhile I'm stuck waiting to go thereo America.
I want to go studying as soon as possible.
I want to go study abroad as soon as possible.
Feedback
Overall, pretty good. It is kind of hard to explain the fine points for which you need to work on. Keep on practicing and you will get better, I'm sure. Since you are waiting to go to America you can use these three months to prepare yourself and gain knowledge, so it isn't always bad. Life is mysterious and maybe years down the line you will be happy that you had to wait three months to go to America. Best of luck.
April 7, 2021
Thank you for your kindness. I hope that our life is peaceful as soon as possible.
Graduation from university
I graduated from university last week.
I had enjoyed it for four years, and learned a lot of things.
There are a lot of opportunityies to communicate with many people.
While I talked with many people, I was able to brush up on my communication skills.
Now, I can naturally talk with people whom I meet athe first time.
I made a lot of friends there.
University is not only for studying, but also nurtures important things.
However my friends isare working in a scattered state in Japan.
I'm going to study in the United States, but I will not be able to go there for three month laters because of COVID-19.
I assume you mean that you cannot come to the states until 3 months from now. Just a quick fix to make it flow a little bit better :)
I am irritatinged because my friends are taking the new first step, but I only wait to go there.
I want to go studying as soon as possible.
Feedback
Your communication is fantastic, great job friend!! I am from the States and I just want to tell you good luck and that when you arrive we will be very lucky to have you :)
April 7, 2021
Thank you for your kindness. I make an effort to develop my English skill.
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