April 12, 2025
Gossip girl
Please correct me and write how can I change some words to more difficult.
I recently watch a series about drama and gossips in rich teenage world. The action is set up in USA. There aren't one main character, but a few. All history of their life write some secret bloger. I like this series, because I like gossips and because this series is happy about the popular.
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“Gossip Girl” is a title of a TV series, so both words should be capitalised because it’s a proper noun.
Please correct me and write how cantell me how I change some words to more difficult use more advanced words.
The phrase “write how can I change” is incorrect word order for an indirect question. It should be “tell me how I can change.”
“More difficult words” is understandable but sounds awkward. When talking about vocabulary, we usually say “more advanced words.”
I recently watched a series about drama and gossips in richthe world of wealthy teenage worldrs.
“Watch” should be “watched” to match the past time expression “recently.”
“Gossips” is incorrect because “gossip” is uncountable in English.
The phrase “rich teenage world” sounds unnatural. It’s clearer and more formal to say “the world of wealthy teenagers.”
The actionstory is set up inin the USA.
We use “set in” for stories, not “set up in.”
We need “the” before “USA”, because “USA” is a proper noun that requires the article “the.”
There aren'isn’t one main character, but a fewseveral.
“Aren’t” is used for plurals, but here you are referring to one character, so the correct form is “isn’t.”
The phrase “a few” is fine, but “several” sounds a bit more advanced and fits the sentence well.
All history of their life write some secret bloger secret blogger writes about their entire lives.
The sentence has incorrect word order and verb agreement.
“Write” should be “writes” because the subject is singular (a blogger).
“All history of their life” is awkward — it’s more natural to say “their entire lives.”
“Bloger” is misspelled — it should be “blogger.”
I like this series, because I likeenjoy gossips and because this series is happy about the popularthe show focuses on popularity and drama.
The comma after “series” is not needed here.
Again, “gossips” should be “gossip” — it’s uncountable.
The phrase “is happy about the popular” is unclear and grammatically incorrect. You probably meant “focuses on popularity” or something similar.
The sentence was a bit repetitive with “because…because,” so we simplified it for smoother flow.
Feedback
You’re doing a great job expressing your thoughts in English—it’s clear you’re making real progress! Your writing shows strong ideas and good structure, but there are a few grammar and vocabulary issues to work on, especially with verb tenses, article usage (“the”), and uncountable nouns like “gossip.” Some of your sentences could be made more natural and formal by improving word order and avoiding repetition.
To elevate your writing, try using more advanced vocabulary like:
“Intrigued” instead of “like” (e.g., “I’m intrigued by drama and gossip”)
“Wealthy” or “affluent” instead of “rich”
“Focuses on” instead of “is about”
Keep practicing, and with each sentence you write, your English will keep getting stronger!
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Thank you very much for help!!! :)))
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Gossip girl Gossip “Gossip Girl” is a title of a TV series, so both words should be capitalised because it’s a proper noun. |
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Please correct me and write how can I change some words to more difficult. Please correct me and The phrase “write how can I change” is incorrect word order for an indirect question. It should be “tell me how I can change.” “More difficult words” is understandable but sounds awkward. When talking about vocabulary, we usually say “more advanced words.” |
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I recently watch a series about drama and gossips in rich teenage world. I recently watched a series about drama and gossip “Watch” should be “watched” to match the past time expression “recently.” “Gossips” is incorrect because “gossip” is uncountable in English. The phrase “rich teenage world” sounds unnatural. It’s clearer and more formal to say “the world of wealthy teenagers.” |
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The action is set up in USA. The We use “set in” for stories, not “set up in.” We need “the” before “USA”, because “USA” is a proper noun that requires the article “the.” |
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There aren't one main character, but a few. There “Aren’t” is used for plurals, but here you are referring to one character, so the correct form is “isn’t.” The phrase “a few” is fine, but “several” sounds a bit more advanced and fits the sentence well. |
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All history of their life write some secret bloger. A The sentence has incorrect word order and verb agreement. “Write” should be “writes” because the subject is singular (a blogger). “All history of their life” is awkward — it’s more natural to say “their entire lives.” “Bloger” is misspelled — it should be “blogger.” |
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I like this series, because I like gossips and because this series is happy about the popular. I like this series The comma after “series” is not needed here. Again, “gossips” should be “gossip” — it’s uncountable. The phrase “is happy about the popular” is unclear and grammatically incorrect. You probably meant “focuses on popularity” or something similar. The sentence was a bit repetitive with “because…because,” so we simplified it for smoother flow. |
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