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My favorite make up is Turkis dh Delight .

Makeup (one word) is a noun: She bought new makeup.
Since you’re naming a favorite thing, you need the noun form.

Turkıish dDelight meake up has been a lotcome popular around the world.

Has been a lot is not natural English. The idea is that it is well-known / common / popular.

t world → corrected to the world.

The smoother, natural phrase is: “has become popular around the world.”

This is make upa vintage and beautiful. brand of makeup

Makeup is one word.
Adjectives come before the noun.

Eyes are very important inwhen it comes to make up.

You need to gives the noun (eyes) a verb (are)

They eyes must be magıical.

SIdeally, star piece big eyes .

Long eyelashes faint looks ...The and a small dot on face .

Long eyelashes, delicate looks, and a small beauty mark on her face.

“faint looks” → “delicate looks”

Faint looks is not natural in English. I think you mean soft / delicate appearance.

Delicate looks is a common way to describe a gentle, refined face.

Added commas

Listing features requires commas: long eyelashes, delicate looks, and a small beauty mark...

“The and a small dot on face” → “and a small beauty mark on her face”

Fixed grammar: dot on face → a small beauty mark on her face.

Beauty mark is the natural term in English for a small dot/mole that adds to someone’s charm.