May 13, 2025
I am currently listening to the last book of the "Game of Thrones" series, and I think being a protagonist there would be super dangerous and give me a lot of anxiety. In the book there are many protagonists: some of them what to go back home, some of them have to deal with managing others as their leader, some of them are just being manipulated by someone older and some are being tortured and dehumanized.
This book can be both cruel and intriguing, but it always keeps your curiosity on since you never know what will happen next, evn if you saw the series, because many things are similar, but many also are quite different in the narration of the story.
Overall, I am really enjoying this audiobook and I know that i will be very sad when I finish it. If you have any reccomendations for my next book or audiobook, suggestions are welcome.
I am currently listening to the last book of the "Game of Thrones" series, and I think being a protagonist therein would be super dangerous and give me a lot of anxiety.
It is not a real location, but a reference to a book, so "there" sounds a little strange.
In the book, there are many protagonists: some of them whant to go back home, some of them have to deal with managleading others as their leader, some of them are just being manipulated by someone older and some are being tortured and dehumanized.
"Leading others" is a less confusing way to describe the challenge for this group of protagonists.
This book can be both cruel and intriguing, but it always keeps your curiosity on on your toes since you never know what will happen next, even if you saw the series, because while many things are similar, but many alsomany are quite different in the narration of the story.
"Keeps you on your toes" is a nice idiom to use here, and conveys your intended meaning much better.
Overall, I am really enjoying this audiobook and I know that iI will be very sad when I finish it.
If you have any reccommendations for my next book or audiobook, suggestions are welcome.
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Very nice job! Enjoy the rest of the audiobook!
Game of Thrones by George R.R. Martin
I am currently listening to the last book of the "Game of Thrones" series, and I think being a protagonist there would be supvery dangerous and givmake me a lot ofvery anxietyous.
Don't need the the 'I' in front of think can be implied by the one earlier. 'super' is very casual 'very' would be more normal.
In the book there are many protagonists: some of them whant to go back home, some of them have to deal with managing others as their leader, some of them are just being manipulated by someone older and some are being tortured and dehumanized.
You can probably get rid of the 'managing'.
This book can be both cruel and intriguing, but it always keeps your curiosity oninterest since you never know what will happen next, even if you saw the series, because many things are similar, but many also arere also quite different in the narration of the story.
You 'keep your interest' rather than 'curiosity'.
Overall, I am really enjoying this audiobook and I know that i will be very sad when I finish it.
If you have any reccommendations for my next book or audiobook, suggestions are welcome.
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Good work just a few corrections. When Martin eventually finishes his next book in the saga (if he ever does) you'll be able to listen to that.
I am currently listening to the last book of the "Game of Thrones" series, and I think being a protagonist there would be super dangerous and. It gives me a lot of anxiety just thinking about it.
It flows better to split the sentence into to 2. You don't have to add the 'just thinking about it' but it emphasises the point.
In the book there are many protagonists: some of them whant to go back home,; some of them have to deal with managing others as their leader,; some of them are just being manipulated by someone older; and some are being tortured and dehumanized.
This book can be both cruel and intriguing, but it always keeps your curiosity on since y guessing. You never know what will happen next, even if you saw've seen the TV series, because many things are similar, but many also arere also quite different in the narration of the storybetween the two.
I split the sentence to help with the flow.
Overall, I am really enjoying this audiobook and I know that iI will be very sad when I finish it.
If you have any reccommendations for my next book or audiobook, suggestions are welcome.
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Great writing. Just made small changes to help it sound more natural.
I don't know if you'd like it but I've just finished Weyward by Emilia Hart about 3 witches across time in England. I enjoyed it!
In the book, there are many protagonists: some of them what to go back home, some of them have to deal with managing others as their leader, some of othemrs are just being manipulated by someone older and some are being tortured and dehumanized.
This book can be both cruel and intriguing, but it always keeps your curiosity onus, since you never know what will happen next, ev. Even if you sawhave seen the series, becaus and hence many things are similar, but many also arere also quite different in the narration of the story.
Overall, I am really enjoying this audiobook and I know that iI will be very sad, when I finish it.
If you have any reccommendations for my next book or audiobook, suggestions are welcome.
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Great work!
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