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April 15, 2021

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Fukushima Wastewater Will Be Released Into the Ocean

Maybe it's one of the most important news these days. It has generated a lot of discussion in China and South Korea, but doesn't seem to be getting enough attention in other countries. The Fukushima crisis was set off in March 2011 by a huge earthquake and tsunami that ripped through northeastern Japan and killed more than 19,000 people. Ten years later, this wastewater will be discharged into the water through some kind of special filtration. But is it environmentally friendly to discharge this wastewater into the ocean? Is this move really safe? It's pity to see the indifference and lack of discussion from foreign media and environmental organizations on this matter.

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Fukushima Wastewater Will Be Released Into the Ocean

Maybe it's one of the most important news these dayrecent news stories.

It has generated a lot of discussion in China and South Korea, but doesn't seem to be getting enough attention in other countries.

The Fukushima crisis was set off in March 2011 by a huge earthquake and tsunami that ripped through northeastern Japan and killed more than 19,000 people.

Ten years later, this wastewater will be discharged into the water through some kind of special filtration.

This sentence is grammatically correct, but the reader does not know what "this wastewater" is referring to as you have not explained it previously.

But is it environmentally friendly to discharge this wastewater into the ocean?

Is this move really safe?

It's a pity to see the indifference and lack of discussion from foreign media and environmental organizations on this matter.

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heyyawn

April 15, 2021

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Fukushima Wastewater Will Be Released Into the Ocean


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Maybe it's one of the most important news these days.


Maybe it's one of the most important news these dayrecent news stories.

It has generated a lot of discussion in China and South Korea, but doesn't seem to be getting enough attention in other countries.


It has generated a lot of discussion in China and South Korea, but doesn't seem to be getting enough attention in other countries.

The Fukushima crisis was set off in March 2011 by a huge earthquake and tsunami that ripped through northeastern Japan and killed more than 19,000 people.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Ten years later, this wastewater will be discharged into the water through some kind of special filtration.


Ten years later, this wastewater will be discharged into the water through some kind of special filtration.

This sentence is grammatically correct, but the reader does not know what "this wastewater" is referring to as you have not explained it previously.

But is it environmentally friendly to discharge this wastewater into the ocean?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Is this move really safe?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's pity to see the indifference and lack of discussion from foreign media and environmental organizations on this matter.


It's a pity to see the indifference and lack of discussion from foreign media and environmental organizations on this matter.

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