May 7, 2021
Friends in my younger days
The first imaginary friend is a little girl with fairy wings, she often encourage me when I cry, and give me some pep talk, those days I truly believe she is the kindess fairy in the world, haha.
The second imaginary friend, or a company, because he stayed with me about 8 years, the first time I met him is from an anime, he did great in season 2, as a reason, I fanned him as an idol, he eventually become an advisor when a decision is needed to be make, stop me to do anything that is harm to myself and cuddle me when I feel really really sad.
He is trully a perfect idol to me, as a result, I often contrast him to any singer, actor, that somehow I have some feelings about them, they never walk into my heart because they didn't pass the standard of him or me.
This story probably sound crazy to anyone, for metally reason, he leave me about 2 years ago, must say that sometimes I miss him, but at last, I met my best friend that is even greater than him.
Friends in my younger days
The first imaginary friend iwas a little girl with fairy wings, she often encouraged me when I cryied, and giave me some pep talk, ts. Those days I truly believe she iwas the kindess fairy in the world, haha.
I changed the tenses to past tense because you are talking about when you were younger.
The second imaginary friend, or a company, because heion, stayed with me for about 8 years, t. The first time I met him iwas from an anime, he did great in season 2, and as a reasonsult, I fanned him as an idol, h. He eventually becoame an advisor when a decision isI needed to be make a decision, stopped me to dofrom doing anything that iso harm to myself, and cuddled me when I feelt really really sad.
You can also say "when decisions needed to be made"
He iwas trully a perfect idol to me, and as a result, I often contrast him to any singer, or actor, that somehow I have some feelings about them, tfor. They never walked into my heart because they didn't pass the standard of him or me.
This story probably sounds crazy to anyone, for metally reason, h. He leaveft me about 2 years ago, but I must say that sometimes I miss him, but a. At last, I met my best friend thatwho is even greater than him.
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Great work! There was just a few mistakes with the tenses but everything else is fine. Keep it up!
May 10, 2021
Thanks!
May 10, 2021
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The first imaginary friend is a little girl with fairy wings, she often encourage me when I cry, and give me some pep talk, those days I truly believe she is the kindess fairy in the world, haha. The first imaginary friend I changed the tenses to past tense because you are talking about when you were younger. |
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The second imaginary friend, or a company, because he stayed with me about 8 years, the first time I met him is from an anime, he did great in season 2, as a reason, I fanned him as an idol, he eventually become an advisor when a decision is needed to be make, stop me to do anything that is harm to myself and cuddle me when I feel really really sad. The second imaginary friend, or You can also say "when decisions needed to be made" |
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He is trully a perfect idol to me, as a result, I often contrast him to any singer, actor, that somehow I have some feelings about them, they never walk into my heart because they didn't pass the standard of him or me. He |
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This story probably sound crazy to anyone, for metally reason, he leave me about 2 years ago, must say that sometimes I miss him, but at last, I met my best friend that is even greater than him. This story probably sounds crazy to anyone |
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