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sho

April 3, 2023

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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not like the English in a textbook, so please correct me so that I can speak as close to a native as possible!
It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!



Mochi. Kinako Mochi and Soy Sauce Mochi. Kinako is roasted soybean flour. I mixed a lot of sugar in the soybean flour.

Boiled bamboo shoots. Dried shishamo. Potato salad. Grilled chicken breast strips wrapped with shiso. Bamboo shoots simmered in soy sauce base.

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Food 4

I'd like to speak English more naturally and not like the English in a textbook, so please correct me so that I can speak as close to a native as possible!

It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!

Mochi.

Kinako Mochi and Soy Sauce Mochi.

Kinako is roasted soybean flour.

I mixed a lot of sugar into the soybean flour.

Boiled bamboo shoots.

Dried shishamo.

Potato salad.

Grilled chicken breast strips wrapped with shiso.

Bamboo shoots simmered in soy sauce base.

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ohh, this looks like a duplicate of the previous post. とにかく、よく書けています!

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sho

April 7, 2023

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間違えて同じのを投稿したみたいです💦
すみません、ありがとうございます!

Mochi.

Kinako Mochi and Soy Sauce Mochi.

Kinako is roasted soybean flour.

I mixed a lot of sugar into the soybean flour.

Boiled bamboo shoots.

Dried shishamo.

Potato salad.

Grilled chicken breast strips wrapped with shiso.

Bamboo shoots simmered in soy sauce base.

I think you don't have to include 'base' for this, just saying 'soy sauce' is fine!

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Great job!!

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sho

April 4, 2023

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Thank you so much!!!🙇‍♂️

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I'd like to speak English more naturally and not like the English in a textbook, so please correct me so that I can speak as close to a native as possible!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's alright if you even change an entire sentence!!


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Mochi.


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Kinako Mochi and Soy Sauce Mochi.


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Kinako is roasted soybean flour.


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I mixed a lot of sugar in the soybean flour.


I mixed a lot of sugar into the soybean flour.

I mixed a lot of sugar into the soybean flour.

Boiled bamboo shoots.


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Dried shishamo.


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Potato salad.


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Grilled chicken breast strips wrapped with shiso.


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Bamboo shoots simmered in soy sauce base.


Bamboo shoots simmered in soy sauce base.

I think you don't have to include 'base' for this, just saying 'soy sauce' is fine!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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