March 12, 2025
An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but didn't know what topic to choose.
I grabbed my phone to look at the pictures in it. Then I chose to share the flowers from my last hike, which happened on Sunday.
You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4
The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video.
The second type is very unique. It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and the flowers can blossom for more than a month.
Cherry blossoms and plum blossoms are quite common, so I believe I don't need to introduce them to you. I enjoy them as well.
In MLA Style: Flowers from My Last Hike¶
In APA Style: Flowers from my last Hhike
In English, there are many different styles of capitalizing things. I mention two famous ones.
ALSO POSSIBLE: An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but didn't knowfelt unsure what topic to choose.
I grabbed my phone to look at the pictures in it.
OPTION A: Then I chose to sharewrite about the flowers from my last hike, which happened on Sunday.¶
OPTION B: Then I chose to write about the flowers from my last hike on Sunday.
选项B比选项A更简洁。
You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4
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The first typimage is of a white plum blossom, which I didwasn't mentioned in the video.
The second typimage is very unique.
It's called the "messenger of spring" in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and theits flowers can blossom for more than a month.
QUESTION: Is it the same in this image? See https://www.gojilin.gov.cn/2025/03/11/c_13947.htm
Cherry blossoms and plum blossoms are quite common, so I believe I don't need to introduce them to you.
I enjoy them as well.
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Interesting. What is this flower called?
Flowers fFrom My lLast Hike
An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English, but I didn't know what topic to choose.
Then I chose to share the flowers from my last hike, which happenedI took on Sunday.
More natural
You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4
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The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video.
It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and t. The flowers can blossom for more than a month.
More natural pacing
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We dont have plum blossoms where I live! I would love to hear more about them. Great writing
Flowers from My last Hike
An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but didn't know what topic to choose.
I grabbed my phone to look at the pictures in it.
Then I chose to share the flowers from my last hike, which happened on Sunday.
You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4 The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video.
The second type is very unique.
It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and the flowers can blossom for more than a month.
Cherry blossoms and plum blossoms are quite common, so I believe I don't need to introduce them to you.
I enjoy them as well.
An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but I didn't know what topic to choose.
Still correct but “I didn’t” sounds more natural
Flowers from My last Hike
An hour ago, I wanted to write something in English but didn't know what topic to choose.
I grabbed my phone to look at the pictures ion it.
Then I chose to share the flowers fromI saw on my last hike, which happeneI did on Sunday.
You can find the images in this video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/kqAljgsBRA4
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The first type is white plum blossom, which I didn't mention in the video.
The second type is very unique.
It's called the messenger of spring in the mountains of East China, because it's always the first one to blossom, and t. The flowers can blossom for more than a month.
I have changed this to 2 sentences just for clarity.
There is subtle difference between the verbs "blossom" and "bloom". Blossom is the early stage of a flower, when it's just starting to open. A bloom is when it's a full flower. So, flowers start by blossoming and can then stay in bloom for weeks or months.
Cherry blossoms and plum blossoms are quite common, so I believe I don't need to introduce them to you.
I enjoy them as well.
Feedback
Very well written. I also watched your video and it was very nice. Your English accent is excellent - keep it up!
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