Nov. 9, 2025
Flowers, cats, and birds on my way jogging
I captured some videos while jogging and combined them into this one: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DHkRZ5yu6e0
I hope you like it as much as I do.
Next time I want to capture the birds more clearly, so I'm looking for a new phone with a long lens.
Flowers, cats, and birds {on my way jogging | along my jogging route | I saw while out jogging}
Your original is pretty good, but “my way jogging” doesn’t feel completely natural, so I’ve offered a couple of imperfect alternatives.
I captured some videoscenes while jogging and combined them into this onevideo: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DHkRZ5yu6e0
I hope you like it as much as I do.
I do like it. :-) I love seeing how wild animals adapt to city life.
Next time I want to capture the birds more clearly, so I'm looking for a new phone with a long lens.
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I have a very nice still camera with a long lense that takes good video too, but I never bring it with me anymore because my phone is so much more convenient. I would like to take better videos though. Maybe I should consider getting a longer lense for my phone, but then I’d probably have to start carrying a tripod, and I know I’m not going to do THAT….
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I should probably just buy one of those GoPro action cameras. :-)
Nov. 11, 2025
I have a camera with a long lens too, but it's too heavy for me to carry all the time.
I've heard that several Android phones in China have extremely high pixel density. I'm still in the process of choosing.
Flowers, cats, and birds on my way while jogging
A more natural title might be "Jogging alongside flowers, cats and birds"
Nov. 11, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Flowers, cats, and birds on my way jogging
I captured some videos while jogging and combined them into this onevideo: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/DHkRZ5yu6e0
I hope you like it as much as I do.
Next time, I want to capture the birds more clearly, so I'm looking for a new phone with a long lens.
Nov. 11, 2025
Thank you so much!
Have a nice day!
Nov. 11, 2025
You too.
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