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Ritsu

Sept. 27, 2025

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First Journal

Today, I start to write a journal on langcorrect in order to preparing for TOEFL.
I am unlike to writing essay, journal, etc., because I hesitated to express my opinion.
I want to continue to write journal on this website.

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Today, I will start to write aing journal entries on langcorrect in order to preparinge for TOEFL.

I am undon't like to writing essays, journals, etc., because I hesitated to express my opinion.

I want to continue to write journal entries on this website.

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good luck!

(My) First Journal Entry

Strictly speaking, "journal entry" refers to the individual pieces of writing, while "journal" refers to the collection of journal entries.

Today, I will start to write aing journal entries on lLangcCorrect in order to preparinge for TOEFL.

(1) The verb forms are a little off in this sentence. I have corrected them, but I shall not go too in depth into the explanations now.
(2) "LangCorrect" is the proper way to capitalise the word.

I am undislike to writing essays, journal entries, etc., because I hesitated to express my opinion.

Keep the tense consistent. You're writing in the present tense here, so it should be "hesitate" and not "hesitated".

I want to continue to writeing journal entries on this website.

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We'll always be here to help! TOEFL頑張ってね!!

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Ritsu

Sept. 27, 2025

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Thank you!

First Journal


(My) First Journal Entry

Strictly speaking, "journal entry" refers to the individual pieces of writing, while "journal" refers to the collection of journal entries.

Today, I start to write a journal on langcorrect in order to preparing for TOEFL.


Today, I will start to write aing journal entries on lLangcCorrect in order to preparinge for TOEFL.

(1) The verb forms are a little off in this sentence. I have corrected them, but I shall not go too in depth into the explanations now. (2) "LangCorrect" is the proper way to capitalise the word.

Today, I will start to write aing journal entries on langcorrect in order to preparinge for TOEFL.

I am unlike to writing essay, journal, etc., because I hesitated to express my opinion.


I am undislike to writing essays, journal entries, etc., because I hesitated to express my opinion.

Keep the tense consistent. You're writing in the present tense here, so it should be "hesitate" and not "hesitated".

I am undon't like to writing essays, journals, etc., because I hesitated to express my opinion.

I want to continue to write journal on this website.


I want to continue to writeing journal entries on this website.

I want to continue to write journal entries on this website.

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