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Koheisan

Nov. 1, 2025

1
First Diary.

I'm starting to write a diary from today.
Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentence.
My diary will be included about my daily studying of English, my family and activities.
I really hope this output being helpfull for my learning.

Now, I'm relaxing weekend.
I have done a few errends, alrady.
I droped off and picked up my daughter to dance lesson.
And I cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.
My daughter is doing maths text, now.
She seems enjoying to study new knowledge.
I should learn from her.

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks!
Please revise my article if you are free.

Thank you.

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First Diary.

I'm starting to write a diary from todaynow on.

This sounds a bit more natural

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentences.

My diary will be included about my daily studying of English, my family and activities.

include and about kind of refers to the same thing so do not usually come together

I really hope this output beingis helpfull for my learning.

Now, I'm relaxing weeken that it's the weekend, I'm more relaxed.

I have done a few erreands, already.

I dropped off and picked up my daughter tofor dance lesson, then picked her up later.

And I cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.

My daughter is doing maths text,her math assignment now.

She seems to enjoying to study learning new knowledge.

I should learn from her.

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Koheisan

Nov. 2, 2025

1

Thank you.
I understood that include and about do not come together.

First Diary.

I'm starwriting to write a diary froma diary starting today.

"From today" sounds a bit wrong in this context, so I reordered the sentence so it makes more sense.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correctaccurate English sentences.

"Correct" usually refers to getting a question right, accurate makes more sense in this context. Also, because you are refering to mulitple sentences, you add an s and make it plural.

My diary will be included about my daily studying of English, my family and other activities.

"Be included" doesn't make sense, so make it a verb form. Also, and_ activities sounds off because there were descriptions of every other item, so I added an other.

I really hope this output being helpfull for my learning.

"Helpful" is spelled with one l. This is generally true for all other words like this (beautiful, plentiful, etc.).

Now, I'm having a relaxing weekend.

"am" is a helping verb, so you need a stronger verb before you get to the noun. Additionally, "am" means you are ---, so it doesn't make sense here.

I have doneran a few erreands, already.

Just a few mispellings here! Also, usually you say that you "run an errand" instead.

I droped off and picked up my daughter tofor her dance lesson.

To doesn't make sense in respect to pick up, so just say for.

And I cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.

My daughter is doing maths text, homework now.

Text may mean a passage or writing, but we usually don't use it in respect to homework.

She seems to enjoying to studying new knowledgethings.

I should learn from her.

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks!

Feedback is always singular, you never add an s.

Please revise my article if you are free.

Thank you.

Feedback

Great job! Good luck with your journey learning English!

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Koheisan

Nov. 2, 2025

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Thank you for your advise.
Your feedback is very helpful.

First Diary. Entry

I'm startgoing to write a diary entry starting from today.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to be able to write correct English sentences.

My diary will be includedtalk about my daily studying of English, my family and my activities.

I really hope this output beingwill be helpfull for my learning.

Now, I'mFor now, I will be relaxing for the weekend.

I have already done a few erreands, alrady.

I dropped off and picked upthen fetched my daughter tofor her dance lessons.

And II had also cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.

My daughter is doing maths texther math homework, now.

(This is my best guess at what you meant to say.)

She seems to be enjoying to study new knowledgeing and learning new things.

I should learn from her.

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks!

"Feedback" is a mass noun, so it doesn't take a plural ending.

Please revise my article if you are free.

Thank you.

Feedback

Welcome! Indeed, writing to practice your English skills is an excellent habit to have. I wish you the best of luck in your studies!

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Koheisan

Nov. 1, 2025

1

Thanks for your feedback.
I believe that writing makes good improvements.

First Diary Entry.

A first diary means the first book that you are writing in

I'm starting to write a diary from today.

You don't need a preposition with "today"

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentence.

My diary will be included information about my daily studying of English, my family and activities.

Include can be in the present tense, I would also use the preposition about to describe the subjects you will write about

I really hope this output beingwill be helpfull for my learning.

will be shows that the action will happen in the future
helpful is spelled with only one l at the end of the word

Now, I'm having/enjoying a relaxing weekend.

we would use a verb in this sentence

I have done a few erreands, already.

a few spelling issues, errands is spelled with an "a", already is spelled with an "e",
you don't need a comma before already

I droped off and picked up my daughter to dance lesson.
I have dropped off my daughter for her dance lesson and picked her up

My daughter is doing maths text, now.
My daughter is doing her math homework now

you don't need a comma before "now"

She seems to enjoying to study new knowledge. learning new things

Thanks for reading, and I wishhope to get some feedbacks!

Feedback

Bravo for a good start. This is my first time on the site and I hope I will learn as much as you are!

Koheisan's avatar
Koheisan

Nov. 1, 2025

1

Thank you for your feedback!
Let' s learn together!

First Diary.

Today, I'm starting to write a diary from today.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentences.

My diary will be included about my daily studyingies of English, my family and activities.

I really hope this output beingdiary is helpfull for my learning.

Now, I'm relaxing on the weekend.

I have already done a few erreands, alrady.

I droped off and picked up my daughter tofrom her dance lesson.

And I cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.

MNow, my daughter is doing maths text, nowwork.

?

She seems to enjoying to studying new knowledge.

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks!

Please revise my articlecorrect my journal if you are free.

Koheisan's avatar
Koheisan

Nov. 1, 2025

1

Thanks for revising!

First Diary.


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First Diary Entry.

A first diary means the first book that you are writing in

First Diary. Entry

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm starting to write a diary from today.


Today, I'm starting to write a diary from today.

I'm starting to write a diary from today.

You don't need a preposition with "today"

I'm startgoing to write a diary entry starting from today.

I'm starwriting to write a diary froma diary starting today.

"From today" sounds a bit wrong in this context, so I reordered the sentence so it makes more sense.

I'm starting to write a diary from todaynow on.

This sounds a bit more natural

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentence.


Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentences.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentence.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to be able to write correct English sentences.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correctaccurate English sentences.

"Correct" usually refers to getting a question right, accurate makes more sense in this context. Also, because you are refering to mulitple sentences, you add an s and make it plural.

Currently, I'm learning English, so I want to write correct English sentences.

My diary will be included about my daily studying of English, my family and activities.


My diary will be included about my daily studyingies of English, my family and activities.

My diary will be included information about my daily studying of English, my family and activities.

Include can be in the present tense, I would also use the preposition about to describe the subjects you will write about

My diary will be includedtalk about my daily studying of English, my family and my activities.

My diary will be included about my daily studying of English, my family and other activities.

"Be included" doesn't make sense, so make it a verb form. Also, and_ activities sounds off because there were descriptions of every other item, so I added an other.

My diary will be included about my daily studying of English, my family and activities.

include and about kind of refers to the same thing so do not usually come together

I really hope this output being helpfull for my learning.


I really hope this output beingdiary is helpfull for my learning.

I really hope this output beingwill be helpfull for my learning.

will be shows that the action will happen in the future helpful is spelled with only one l at the end of the word

I really hope this output beingwill be helpfull for my learning.

I really hope this output being helpfull for my learning.

"Helpful" is spelled with one l. This is generally true for all other words like this (beautiful, plentiful, etc.).

I really hope this output beingis helpfull for my learning.

Now, I'm relaxing weekend.


Now, I'm relaxing on the weekend.

Now, I'm having/enjoying a relaxing weekend.

we would use a verb in this sentence

Now, I'mFor now, I will be relaxing for the weekend.

Now, I'm having a relaxing weekend.

"am" is a helping verb, so you need a stronger verb before you get to the noun. Additionally, "am" means you are ---, so it doesn't make sense here.

Now, I'm relaxing weeken that it's the weekend, I'm more relaxed.

I have done a few errends, alrady.


I have already done a few erreands, alrady.

I have done a few erreands, already.

a few spelling issues, errands is spelled with an "a", already is spelled with an "e", you don't need a comma before already

I have already done a few erreands, alrady.

I have doneran a few erreands, already.

Just a few mispellings here! Also, usually you say that you "run an errand" instead.

I have done a few erreands, already.

I droped off and picked up my daughter to dance lesson.


I droped off and picked up my daughter tofrom her dance lesson.

I droped off and picked up my daughter to dance lesson.
I have dropped off my daughter for her dance lesson and picked her up

I dropped off and picked upthen fetched my daughter tofor her dance lessons.

I droped off and picked up my daughter tofor her dance lesson.

To doesn't make sense in respect to pick up, so just say for.

I dropped off and picked up my daughter tofor dance lesson, then picked her up later.

And I cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.


And I cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.

And II had also cooked yakisoba (Japanese fried noodle dish) for lunch.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My daughter is doing maths text, now.


MNow, my daughter is doing maths text, nowwork.

?

My daughter is doing maths text, now.
My daughter is doing her math homework now

you don't need a comma before "now"

My daughter is doing maths texther math homework, now.

(This is my best guess at what you meant to say.)

My daughter is doing maths text, homework now.

Text may mean a passage or writing, but we usually don't use it in respect to homework.

My daughter is doing maths text,her math assignment now.

She seems enjoying to study new knowledge.


She seems to enjoying to studying new knowledge.

She seems to enjoying to study new knowledge. learning new things

She seems to be enjoying to study new knowledgeing and learning new things.

She seems to enjoying to studying new knowledgethings.

She seems to enjoying to study learning new knowledge.

I should learn from her.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks!


Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks!

Thanks for reading, and I wishhope to get some feedbacks!

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks!

"Feedback" is a mass noun, so it doesn't take a plural ending.

Thanks for reading, and I wish to get some feedbacks!

Feedback is always singular, you never add an s.

Please revise my article if you are free.


Please revise my articlecorrect my journal if you are free.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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