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Weslleyemanuel

April 16, 2025

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First day here

I wanna know how it works here. I'm new and Brazilian.


Eu queria saber como funciona aqui. Sou novo e brasileiro

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First day here

I wanna know how it works here.

I'm new and Brazilian.

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Weslleyemanuel

April 17, 2025

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oh,thanks!

First day here

I wanna know how it works here.

"Wanna" is pretty informal. If you want to sound formal, use "want to". Otherwise, it's good as is.

I'm new andhere, and I'm Brazilian.

Not wrong, but this feels a little better to me.

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First day here


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I wanna know how it works here.


I wanna know how it works here.

"Wanna" is pretty informal. If you want to sound formal, use "want to". Otherwise, it's good as is.

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I'm new and Brazilian.


I'm new andhere, and I'm Brazilian.

Not wrong, but this feels a little better to me.

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