Sept. 3, 2025
first day as a sophomore
sep 1 ,monday was my first day as a sophomore student at uni,i wasnt nervous at all but excited that i dont have to spend my all day at home . i had two lectures and the instructors were so good as compare to last year's.after classes i waited for two hours for the public bus ,somehow i managed to took a private cab and get home . it was a very tiring day for me .public transport sucks
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Title capitalization rules. Note, it'd be a little more natural as "My First Day as a Sophomore"
sep 1 ,mondayMonday, Sept. 1st was my first day as a sophomore student at uni,i. I wasn't nervous at all, but rather/actually excited that iI donidn't have to spend my allwhole day at home .
When listing day of the week and then date, the day of the week goes first. It's a bit more common to write as "1st" than "1."
I would add one more word to establish the contrast (from negative to positive) after but; two suggestions provided above
iI had two lectures and the instructors were so good as compared to last year's.a After my classes i, I waited for two hours for the public bus ,s. Somehow iI managed to tookake a private cab and get home .
iIt was a very tiring day for me .p. Public transport sucks (here).
I would add "here" to specify that public transport sucks specifically where you live, otherwise it stands as more of a general statement against public transportation.
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Great job. Main edits were for grammar: capitalization, adding apostrophes, correcting spacing around commas/periods.
Sept. 3, 2025
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first day as a sophomore
Title capitalization rules. Note, it'd be a little more natural as "My First Day as a Sophomore" |
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sep 1 ,monday was my first day as a sophomore student at uni,i wasnt nervous at all but excited that i dont have to spend my all day at home .
When listing day of the week and then date, the day of the week goes first. It's a bit more common to write as "1st" than "1." I would add one more word to establish the contrast (from negative to positive) after but; two suggestions provided above |
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i had two lectures and the instructors were so good as compare to last year's.after classes i waited for two hours for the public bus ,somehow i managed to took a private cab and get homw . |
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it was very a tiring day for me .public transport sucks |
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i had two lectures and the instructors were so good as compare to last year's.after classes i waited for two hours for the public bus ,somehow i managed to took a private cab and get home .
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it was a very atiring day for me .public transport sucks |
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it was a very tiring day for me .public transport sucks
I would add "here" to specify that public transport sucks specifically where you live, otherwise it stands as more of a general statement against public transportation. |
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