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May 11, 2021

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FIRE Movement

Financial Independence, Retire Early that is the meaning of FIRE.

30 years ago, when I start my first job.

The colleague sitting next to me already said the same thing.

I will retire at the age early 30 (our age was early 20) and travel the world…

I was young and especially stupid, so I believe that is my dream too!

Some years later we both working in other company.

I never contact him but I am sure he didn’t achieve his “dream”.

Me too!

30 years later, people just don’t change.

Same idea with a new “package”.

So, if you just step out school and start your first job.

I will tell you don’t follow “FIRE” is a wishful thinking!

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The meaning of FIRE is Financial Independence, Retire Early that is the meaning of FIRE.

30 years ago, when I started my first job.

'start' is present test, 'started' is past tense

The colleague sitting next to me had already said the same thing.

I will retire at the age early 30 (our age wasin my early 30's (we were in our early 20's) and travel the world…

Also, for a specific age, say "age of ___"
For example
"I will retire at the age of 32"

I was young and especially stupid, so I believed that iwas my dream too!

Some years later we were both working in another company.

I never contacted him but I am sure he didn’t achieve his “dream”.

Me tooneither!

Because it was something that did not happen, you can use 'neither' instead.
For example:
"He achieved his dream. Me too!"
"He did not achieve his dream. Me neither!"

So, if you have just stepped out school and started your first job.

I will tell you don’t follow “FIRE”, is at is wishful thinking!

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Great job on this!

Some years later we both working in other company.


Some years later we were both working in another company.

FIRE Movement


Financial Independence, Retire Early that is the meaning of FIRE.


The meaning of FIRE is Financial Independence, Retire Early that is the meaning of FIRE.

30 years ago, when I start my first job.


30 years ago, when I started my first job.

'start' is present test, 'started' is past tense

The colleague sitting next to me already said the same thing.


The colleague sitting next to me had already said the same thing.

I will retire at the age early 30 (our age was early 20) and travel the world…


I will retire at the age early 30 (our age wasin my early 30's (we were in our early 20's) and travel the world…

Also, for a specific age, say "age of ___" For example "I will retire at the age of 32"

I was young and especially stupid, so I believe that is my dream too!


I was young and especially stupid, so I believed that iwas my dream too!

I never contact him but I am sure he didn’t achieve his “dream”.


I never contacted him but I am sure he didn’t achieve his “dream”.

Me too!


Me tooneither!

Because it was something that did not happen, you can use 'neither' instead. For example: "He achieved his dream. Me too!" "He did not achieve his dream. Me neither!"

30 years later, people just don’t change.


Same idea with a new “package”.


So, if you just step out school and start your first job.


So, if you have just stepped out school and started your first job.

I will tell you don’t follow “FIRE” is a wishful thinking!


I will tell you don’t follow “FIRE”, is at is wishful thinking!

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