Finally I found thea game that I love

Last week, when I was scrolling through the Steam spring sale website, I found a game called No Man's Sky.

I think I have heard of this game berfore, in 2016 many gamers were disgusted with this game because of it's poor graphical quality and content.

They said the developer didn't abandon their game and always pushed many update to madke the game reached it's full potential.

The game is so full with content and the graphics looks stunning.

For video games, we normally talk about the "graphics". A graphic is normally a single image, like an illustration in a book.

Last night I a found really good-looking ship, and I was so happy forbecause of it.

"happy for it" would imply you felt happy on behalf of the ship. It's a bit weird to say about an inanimate object like a ship. Normally you'd say you were happy for your friend, when something good happened to your friend, for example. If the ship caused you to feel happy, it's better to say "happy because of it/the ship".

Finally I found thea game that I love.

"the game that I love" would imply it's the only game you love, to the exclusion of all other games. It's a very strong statement - people might say "the one that I love" about their partner for example, but "a game that I love" is slightly less emphatic statement which sounds more reasonable here.

Finally, I found thea game that I love

Last week, whilen I was scrolling through Steam spring sale website, I found a game called No Man's Sky.

Technically, you were correct but this is more natural

I think I ha’ve heard about this game berfore, —in 2016 many gamers disgust with this gamewere upset with it because of it's poor graphic quality and content.

More natural
“Disgust” is a very strong word that is usually used with things like rotten food, dirty latrines, incredibly rude behavior, etc

They said the developers didn't abandon their game and always push manyed updates to made the game reached it's full potential.

“Updates” plural makes “many” redundant

Because it's on sale, I finally I bought it.

More natural—“finally” always emphasizes the word that it’s next to, so you want it to emphasize the verb instead of the noun

I think it's true, —No Man's Sky is so good,; I really like it.

The game is so full withof content and the graphics looks stunning.

Last night I a found a really good-looking ship, and I was so happy forabout it.

Finally, I found thea game that I love.

Last week, when I was scrolling through the Steam spring sale website, I found a game called No Man's Sky.

I think I have heard of this game berfore, in 2016 when many gamers were disgusted with ithis game because of it's poor graphic quality and content.

But when I read the latest comment about this game last week, I found that many people liked it.

They said the developer didn't abandon their game and always pushed many updates to madke sure the game reached it's full potential.

The game is so full withof content and the graphic looks stunning.

Last night I a found a really good-looking ship, and I was so happy forwith it.

Last week, when I was scrolling through the Steam spring sale website, I found a game called No Man's Sky.

I think I have heard of this game berfore, i. In 2016, many gamers disgustwere disappointed with this game because of it's poor graphic quality and content.

Disappointed sounds more natural here. You could also use words like "furious" or "frustrated". The word disgust (or disgusted) doesn't

They said the developer didn't abandon their game and always pushed many updates to madke the game reached it's full potential.

Because it's on sale, I finally I bought it.

I think it's true, No Man's Sky is so good,. I really like it.

Works better as two sentences.

Last night I a found a really good-looking ship, and I was so happy forabout it.

Finally I found thea game that I love.