May 13, 2025
Fictional hotel review
Task:
You recently stayed in a hotel. Write a review of your stay for an online review site. You should include
• when you stayed there, how long you stayed, and who you stayed with
• what you enjoyed, and why
• what you did not like, and why not
My text:
Me and my partner stayed at this hotel from March 3rd to March 17th this year. If you are looking for a quiet space for from any distraction, this might be the perfect option for you. There are no major roads closeby, making it a perfect wellness experience. Though being so far off, Cairo international airport is only thirty minutes away and taxis are available spontaneously for both directions. Every morning, personnel is making sure the pool is warm enough to swim in and cleans out the dirt that had gotten into it over night. There is always a free spot to lie down, whether that's the pool or the private beach. Hence only allowing adults, it is a quiet space during the day. At night, there is enough entertainment for every kind of person. The offers reach from calm Bingo nights to fun rock parties. The rooms were cleaned every other day, thus being very clean. The mattresses are extremely comfortable, allowing you to sleep as deep as a baby.
Despite deserving a good review, there is one or two things you should consider before booking your stay. The receptionist at our arrival was a little unfriendly and the food offered in the restaurant isn't for everyone. In case you want to eat outside, the closest option is a mall, being a twenty-minute drive away. Sometimes, the music of the parties and shows can be heard in the rooms until the late evening.
If you are looking for a quiet space foar from any distraction, this might be the perfect option for you.
There are no major roads closeby, making it a perfect wellness experience.
ThoughDespite being so far off, Cairo iInternational aAirport is only thirty minutes away and taxis are available spontaneously for both directions.
I think "Despite" sounds better
Every morning, personnel is/staff makinge sure the pool is warm enough to swim in and cleans out the dirt that had gotten into it over night.
"staff" sounds more natural
There is always a free spot to lie down, whether that's by the pool or the private beach.
HenceDue to only allowing adults, it is a quiet space during the day.
At night, there is enough entertainment for every kind of person.
The offers reachange from calm Bingo nights to fun rock parties.
The rooms were cleaned every other day, thus being very clean.
"thus being very clean" is correct but a little clunky sounding. Maybe "and so were very clean".
The mattresses are extremely comfortable, allowing you to sleep as deep as a baby.
I would say "sleep like a baby".
Despite deserving a good review, there isare one or two things you should consider before booking your stay.
The receptionist at our arrival was a little unfriendly and the food offered in the restaurant isn't for everyone.
In casef you want to eat outside, the closest option is a mall, being a twenty-minute drive away.
Sometimes, the music of the parties and shows can be heard in the rooms until the late evening.
Feedback
Nicely written, good job! Your mistakes were very small, and didn't cause misunderstandings.
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Me and my partner stayed at this hotel from March 3rd to Marchthe 17th of this year.
If you are looking for a quiet splace foar from any distractions, this might be the perfect option for you.
ThoughDespite being so far offaway, Cairo international airport is only thirty minutes away and taxis are easily available spontaneously for both directions.
Every morning, personnel is making sure that the pool is warm enough to swim in and cleans out the dirt that had gotten into it over night.
HeSince it only allowings adults, it is a quiet splace during the day.
The offers reachange from calm Bbingo nights to fun rock parties.
The mattresses are extremely comfortable, allowing you to sleep as deep as a baby.
Despite deserving a good review, there isare one or two things you should consider before booking your stay.
Sometimes, the music ofat the parties and shows can be heard in the rooms until the late evenings.
Feedback
Keep it up!
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Fictional hotel review |
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Task: You recently stayed in a hotel. |
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Write a review of your stay for an online review site. |
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You should include • when you stayed there, how long you stayed, and who you stayed with • what you enjoyed, and why • what you did not like, and why not My text: Me and my partner stayed at this hotel from March 3rd to March 17th this year. You should include |
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If you are looking for a quiet space for from any distraction, this might be the perfect option for you. If you are looking for a quiet If you are looking for a quiet space f |
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There are no major roads closeby, making it a perfect wellness experience. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Though being so far off, Cairo international airport is only thirty minutes away and taxis are available spontaneously for both directions.
I think "Despite" sounds better |
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Every morning, personnel is making sure the pool is warm enough to swim in and cleans out the dirt that had gotten into it over night. Every morning, personnel is making sure that the pool is warm enough to swim in and cleans out the dirt that had gotten into it over night. Every morning, personnel "staff" sounds more natural |
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There is always a free spot to lie down, whether that's the pool or the private beach. There is always a free spot to lie down, whether that's by the pool or the private beach. |
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Hence only allowing adults, it is a quiet space during the day.
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At night, there is enough entertainment for every kind of person. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The offers reach from calm Bingo nights to fun rock parties. The offers r The offers r |
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The rooms were cleaned every other day, thus being very clean. The rooms were cleaned every other day, thus being very clean. "thus being very clean" is correct but a little clunky sounding. Maybe "and so were very clean". |
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The mattresses are extremely comfortable, allowing you to sleep as deep as a baby. The mattresses are extremely comfortable, allowing you to sleep as deep as a baby. The mattresses are extremely comfortable, allowing you to sleep as deep as a baby. I would say "sleep like a baby". |
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Despite deserving a good review, there is one or two things you should consider before booking your stay. Despite deserving a good review, there Despite deserving a good review, there |
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The receptionist at our arrival was a little unfriendly and the food offered in the restaurant isn't for everyone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In case you want to eat outside, the closest option is a mall, being a twenty-minute drive away. I |
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Sometimes, the music of the parties and shows can be heard in the rooms until the late evening. Sometimes, the music This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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