May 17, 2021
Religions are the primary element, which is a critical point to contemplate in the big picture, to analyze the rising of feminism. Because in most of the kingdom, society, system, their establishment is based on the religious, in the initial period. Unfortunately, from West to East, religions always have negative views about females, including in China. As people know, any historical religions are the most original and venerable power to stably control and grasp a social order before a rising new government. The influence of any religion could not be underestimated. Because there were many initial laws established under the domestic religious influences. Many direct consequences are that the position of females in their family had been depressed and had unfair treatment in society.
Feminism #2
Religions are the primary element, which is a critical point to contemplate in the big picture, to analyzeIt is important to understand the influence of various religions when contemplating the risinge of feminism.
Because in most of the kingdom, society, system, their establishment is based on the religious, in the initial periodMost countries and social institutions throughout history have been shaped by religious values.
Unfortunately, from West to East, religions always have negative views about females, including in Chinareligions from all over the world have consistently held negative views about women. The religions of China are no exception.
You're making a lot of claims but not really backing them up with anything. If I was writing this I would probably include examples of various religions advocating for the subordination of women. I.e. the bible quote 1 Timothy 2:12: "But I suffer not a woman to teach, nor to usurp authority over the man, but to be in silence."
As people know, any hHistorically, religions are the most original and venerable power to stably control and grasp a sociahave been among the most stable and powerful forder before a rising new governmentces exerting influence over government and social order.
The influence of any religion could annot be undoverestimated.
Because thereMany laws were many initial lawsly established under the influence of domestic religious influencesn.
ManyA direct consequences are that the position of females of this is that women have been relegated to a subordinate position in their own family had been depressed and had unfair treatment inies and treated unfairly by society.
Feedback
A lot of your sentences here are just variations of "Religion is a powerful social force that has contributed to the oppression of women". I would try to sum this up in a few shorter sentence and then provide some specific examples if you need more lines.
Feminism #2 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Religions are the primary element, which is a critical point to contemplate in the big picture, to analyze the rising of feminism.
|
Because in most of the kingdom, society, system, their establishment is based on the religious, in the initial period.
|
Unfortunately, from West to East, religions always have negative views about females, including in China. Unfortunately, You're making a lot of claims but not really backing them up with anything. If I was writing this I would probably include examples of various religions advocating for the subordination of women. I.e. the bible quote 1 Timothy 2:12: "But I suffer not a woman to teach, nor to usurp authority over the man, but to be in silence." |
As people know, any historical religions are the most original and venerable power to stably control and grasp a social order before a rising new government.
|
The influence of any religion could not be underestimated. The influence of |
Because there were many initial laws established under the domestic religious influences.
|
Many direct consequences are that the position of females in their family had been depressed and had unfair treatment in society.
|
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium